This poetry fit both of them so perfectly!

It's beautiful. And feel that it's very accurate... :)

wow, this is a really good poem. I like the contradictions you have in there, like "Im lonely, but not alone," or "Im lost, in a place that i know." I think it shows perfectley how confused they are, and even when everyones around them laughing, they still feel so isolated and sad. Anyways, thanks for writing such an awesome poem, and i hope you write more!