Hey i just wanted to let u know that I absolutely loved this fanfic ive reread it that many times and fell deeply inlove with the concept and characters. I love how you characterised the Wind and how it was almost like she represented what could of happened with Jack/the other spirits in the worst case scenario. I also had theories of how at the end she sees how Jack finally has his family and sympathises with Pitch and how he would do anything to be seen, even if it meant that he was hated. Would imagine that the wind would decide to stay with pitch cuz he doesnt have a family. I love this fanfic ansd i hope one day that you’ll complete it. ️️️

PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS PLEASE!

can you pls update the story it's really wonderful and I am really excited for the next chapter.

Okay, so, I don't mean to be rude, but every scene goes on and on and on to the point where I was forced to skim. Not only that, but the amount of pain you are putting your character through just for sympathy and shock, well, you overdid it, and it stopped working. The whole psyche thing was too far from the original story line, to OOC, and maybe I would've thought it was okay if you didn't suddenly beat her up and describe it in a page worth of detail? For one, it didn't make sense, at all. I understood it, but the whole theme was far fetched at best. I came to this story thinking, WHOA, she wrote my idea for a fanfiction for ROTG! I should read it because I had the same idea with for wind! What I got was overly detailed blabber. Your first page was gods, holy crap, so good. Everything after that drowned on and when I got to chapter ten I found myself skimming the entire page because it was just a huge run on. The flaws I see in this story are; Overuse of detail where it doesn't matter, too far-fetched and OOC, and a questionable at best premise. Not to say you aren't a good writer, you definitely are. But when I was forced to skim and arch my eyebrow at everything the 'psyche' did to the guardians in this imaginary world, cringing at most of it, I realized I couldn't read more. Deserves a good rewrite and a lot chopped out to make it seem more believable. I get it that this girl is in pain from loneliness but her PSYCHE beats up the guardians and then gets beat around by nothing like an invisible hulk? Unbelievable. OOC. Far fetched. Cringe.

this fanfiction is gold. it's brilliant even. there is so much angst that 'windit's so sad that she doesn't have a name for herself. something that belongs to her and her alone that will define her) has to face because there is absolutely nothing, no one that will ever know of her existence. she is a living being, immortal and literally the personification of wind but still a living being. and yet all her personalised existence will come down to is something that is not alive. and yet she is still able to retain that positivity found so rare in people to her very last breath. hell she even sympathised with pitch when even the guardians were unable to do being guardians and all. i think it's just absolutely amazing how you managed to come up with a character so original with such a beautiful personality. and I for one, found her crush on jack absolutely adorable. but when she showed how much she actually loved him, stopping the psyche and all, that honestly gave me so many feelings. i know that I would be unable to put some blame on jack if I were her for not knowing anything about my existence even if the fact that jack cannot see her is so painfully clear. because let's face it, most of us would succumb to the dark side of ourselves to make things easier by lightening the load on our shoulders even if it were to be by dumping it on someone else. i also really like the interactions between the other guardians and jack and the breakdown that pitch had as I honestly sympathise for him and want him to just be happier. lastly, just wanted to say that the little thing you did there by getting jack to describe 'wind' with her actual appearance correctly was positively the most adorable thing i have ever read. all in all, I just wanted to say that this was a beautifully put together piece you have done here and that I have really enjoyed reading the chapters you've uploaded this far. hoping for more amazing chapters from you, one of this fanfiction's biggest fans. p.s. I can't believe I only found out about this fanfiction today.

I really like this story. The idea behind is sad but it makes the story much more interesting. Also like how the Guardians and Pitch react to seeing some of the sadder and happier memories. It is cute how they tease Jack of his crush on her. I truly can't wait to read more.

crud..now i ship tooth and pich.. i feel betrayed by my own mind righy now..

NOOOOOOOOOO I just found this story TODAAAAAAY! The little bits of comedy and you describe what they are feeling so well I feel it too. PLEASE! If you are still working on this story, promise an update. I don't care how long it takes, just as long as I know you will update.

But I do have one complaint. Your writing style is so beautifully detailed that I find myself skipping a few of the paragraphs. I'm not trying to make you change anything if you don't want to but sometimes I just want to get to the point of action. You can whatever you want in the end and my opinion is only one in 208. Your story is beautiful and I hope you continue it.

This is well written but I think the past 3 chapters where they the stuck in the memories was a little boring and a little painful to read. Really long and going know where.
Besides that I love how the wind was a spirit that stuck by Jacks side even when he couldn't see her. It's cute cause in the movie jack talks to the wind

Hmm, I finally got around to reading this particular fic. Though I'm not one for JackxOC stories, its interesting that you're personifying the wind that delivers Jack where he needs to be. Although I picture the Wind personified in another way, your interpretation works as well.

woah. I must read this! it sounds amazing! see you in a few chapters!

Iseriously cannot wait to read more and i hope everything goes well for you! Good luck with everything! QwQ

That was so good. I just sat for an entire day reading your story. I can't wait for more. Please update.

please update This story gives me life girl.

This story is amazing! So many feels! I love that we get to see Jackson, Emma, and his mom! Please update soon!