I feel bad for Tobias always lack of love wishing that someone would love him and finally when he find the only person he can love and love him , Veronica Roth take her away from him , I am wonder if she hate him because I could never understand tremendous cruelty. I hate
VERONICA ROTH

Good job ,you are way better then Veronica Roth , she needs to learn from you.

What did Eric do to Shauna?

This new chapter that isn’t in Divergent is real goof

Good bye

I loved these books from Tobias’ point of view. They kind of complete Divergent and Insurgent for me. Windchimed does SUCH a great job in putting herself in his head.

Which dou read first

You probably won't read this but I just wanted to say I think you conveyed the emotions in this chapter very well and it was very well written.

Yes yes yes. I love what you did with this.

Ugh! #allthefeels. I love how you incorporated and described all the conflicting emotions, thoughts and sensations from Tobias.

Excellent! This was perfect, as good as Veronica Roth herself.

You are great talent and an imagination incredible ! I love read your storie ! Thank you so much !

I love your books, all of them
the view you draw into light in Becoming determinant, the story you bring to life in Determinant, the details you outline in Priors ring
I love the way you write (that also helped me to grew in my English knowledge)
I think that all I am trying to say is thank you

First of all, I loved the story from Four/Tobias 's POV. And also your Determinant and PR. It is way way way better than Allegiant.
But I wish you would have continued the whole Insurgent. I did read Killing Four. Honesty, I didn't like it that much. You can tell the author's changed, drastically. You're writing is very sophisticated and real.
Please, at some point if you decide to come back to the Divergent universe, finish the Insurgent, please. I would love to read it penned by you.

It is a really goid addition. This chapter surely flows through Divergent original book.