You know, after finally getting around to reading this story, I really like it. Lots of emotion and tension, arguing and an almost-necessary makeover. Nice job.

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I didn't think the ending was cheesy all i thought it was perfect with the part of the Wicked song For Good.

-In a rather weird cherring outfit- YEA that story was great... that story was great... goooooooooooooooo PRINCESS! WOOO YEA-random flips and twirls around the room- yea but seriously I liked it especially the last two chapters when stuff started to get serious really fast.. I DEMAND MORE STORIES LIKE THIS D... no no crimson be good...

I will be on the look out for more so you can expect me to reply on those awesome,tear jerking, exciting moments in a authors work.

I want you to know that i'm a male & your story is way past ultra mega awesome. BTW are you planning to add Noah Raymond Thompson the male panda bear & his half-brother Spencer Daniel Ricardo the male gorilla into the story? No pressure. I also want to tell you so you won't get confused on why i had to change my pen name is because someone hacked into bearvalley 3365 which was my old pen name & wrote very rude comments, & pinned the blame on me even though i didn't write the comments in the first place.

YES MWUAHAHAAHAHAHAH yes yes ITS ALIIIIIIIIIIIIVE BWAHAAHHAAHAHAHA the make over is just the first step in the quest to control them all using Rosy hehehehehe I love it already. You yes you author you better not be getting writers block yet I want more... MORE I TELL YOU D and you people better review more or I will be having a nice meal later on with your...-turned away laughing like a maniac-

These fingers of my burn with an awesome power, their burning grip tells me to leave a review and now you will take all of it, my joy my happiness, my amusement! SHINING FINGERS!?-hit by a semi-truck for taking too long-

Yea but seriously I like where this is going so far I have only read stories were the characters wanted to be bad, this seems like a more... er safe approach to change ' well try not to get writers block or I will have to shining finger sword fanfiction.

I really enjoy this story so far & i just want all those who had never heard the spell from the story it was from a musical called Wicked. I just can't wait to see what's going to happen in chapter 3.

OMG! Shut up bearvalley! This author put a lot of effort into this story and all you have to say is that you want your silly OCs in there. Stop annoying people with your spam and actually say something about the story for once!

I like this. Scourge and Rosy aren't written about very often anymore, so I'm glad you've written something new and exciting. I really like her they're both in character. And I like the emotion you put in when Rosy cried and Meghan helped like a true friend. Great story. :)

I really think that this is a very good beginning & was wondering could you please add Noah Raymond Thompson a male panda bear & his half -brother Spencer Timothy Ricardo a male gorilla into your story?

Well I see someone has a even more problematic person to deal with YOU GOT IT EASY SONIC!? The Anti's huh... I haven't really paid much attention to them.. well aside from your stories that is, but I can't help laughing a bit at their mishaps so you already know what time it is...LET"S GET IT REVIEW PEOPLE OR ... gently be devoured.