rip.

Hope you add more one day

Interesting

How's about some new chapters? This is an interesting story exploring new and different things. It would be a shame to let it drop!

I enjoyed the crossover and am eargerly awaiting your next. You have woven the two worlds together nicely. The one area that I would coment on involves your grammer. Your tenses don't match occasionally.

This is pretty enjoyable. I sincerely hope you may return to this work soon

This is one of the best stories of this crossover that I have ever read.

David:
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Ollivander's began selling wands in England in 382 BC, which supposedly arrived from Rome (although Roman occupation of the British Isles didn't happen until 43 AD). There is a reference to an Ancient Greek wizard casting the Patronus charm (which would necessarily have been around 200 years prior to opening Ollivander's), but there's no confirmation he used a wand to do it. The earliest *explicit* reference to wand use in HP (outside Ollivander selling them) is in 1105 in Germany.

However, while there is some uncertainty about the origins of wands in HP, it is certainly a European invention, according to the Pottermore page on Uagadou, the African magic school.

Please update this story!

very good more please

Where's Ron? And why the push to turn Hermione into a girlfriend? The last thing HP needs is a humorless, pushy, overly-sensitive know-it-all girlfriend who values Dumbledore's opinion more than HP's.

This chapter ended with a lot of very short paragraphs that should probably have been grouped into larger units. It ended up being very choppy.

Wands certainly predate the Romans. The earliest literary reference to wands is the Odyssey (Circe uses one), which is Greek. Egyptians also had wands but they were shaped more like boomerangs than pointers.

Indeed one of the better attempts at hp/Dresden crossover very well done introduction to the story looks like your laying. The foundation for an interesting story

good story overall. though i think you having mab threaten the Carpenters is a bit overkill. not even Mab would be willing to against an Archangel over something so trivial.