Seriously?! Please come back to finish this! I love this Edward!

Please finish this..its a great story..

Excellent. Hope you finish!

What the heck where is the rest of it i thought u started the other half ugh

Please say there is a sequel!

It's not fair posting your story complete, It would be ok if there was a sequel, it's not the case either.
And Just so you know your italian it's very bad,
Beatrice

Just wanted to say that this italian doesnt make any sense...

Love this story, but oh my god I can't believe it isn't finished...
I need to start checking that out before reading.
Gutted.. I hope you finish it one day x

Wow, am I sick to have absolutely loved this chapter... :)

I make it a point to not read unfinished stories because it really irks me not knowing what happens. You haven’t made the sequel and it’s been along time. Don’t mark it as finished if you haven’t finished it. Good story other than that

I bet she's pregnant

I knew it from the beginning. that whole death scene came out sus as hell. plus when you had Edward say that he couldn't be killed, then killed him, it was to fucking cliche to be true

Oh no! I lost track of the chapters, didn’t realize the story was near the end. What a shock and disappointment. This isn’t a completed story just because the writer marked “Complete”. I make a point of not reading Only completed stories. If I knew it wasn’t finished, I wouldn’t have read it. Too frustrating! What a gyp!

I would rather Bella let Edward do the torturing for info. Shooting and killing in self defense is one thing, torture is something else.

This is a very exciting story. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Please finish this story. It’s amazing and it’s killing me to not know the ending