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Destinies Entwined chapter 2 . 6/17/2014 WOW. Let's just say that it's 5 am, and I HAD to read this all the way through before going to bed. This is THAT enrapturing. Wide awake at dawn and full of the waves of emotion that this story is. I see that it's been about 4 months since your last update. I hope you plan on finishing this. Sweet Jeebus, don't leave it, or me, or the rest of your readers, hanging! |
Anon1 chapter 2 . 4/29/2014 I hope you're still writing this, it's beautiful and painful and you do a good job at keeping characters true to their characters and the quotes from books you pick or mythology references are so well placed and I especially loved the astrology. I want to see your take on their reunion and I hope to read it soon |
Yuneyn chapter 2 . 3/19/2014 This is one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read... Your writing skills are amazing, and their pain is just... oozing out of every word. It made my heart ache and I shed a few tears towards the end... Shion needing to move on is an idea I hate, but it's just natural after so many years of knowing nothing, not even if Nezumi's alive. It's getting to a point when it's just torture. I just hope he hasn't moved on too far for Nezumi to catch up with him... I'll definitely be following your story to know what happens next. |
AhikuBoruchi chapter 2 . 2/17/2014 Meh...you made my cry...a lot! To be honest, nearly the whole second half of the second chapter. And I still start crying when I think about it. (;_;) It really hurt to read it, I can feel their pain. XD Wow... So I guess that means it's very well written. (It is, definitely!) I really love that you look at both of them and their fears and feelings from various angles. (btw. I also loved your No. 6 analyses on Tumblr...they really help to understand Nezumi's character better...) And I love the metaphors and comparisons... and I want to praise it more but my English is way to horrible to express what I think right now. Sorry. ._. So well...thank you for writing it, feel praised like hell and so one. It's great, really! I hope you'll continue it soon, but take your time... (lol, I'm starting to cry again... o_o Normally I'm no crybaby at all...) PS: I don't want Shion to sleep around... Q_Q Even if he has to move one...noooo! *beats his head with an encyclopedia* And I hope Nezumi is knocking... if not I'll...beat him up with a bookshelf! D: He deserves it for making Shion wait 6 fucking years and hurting him so much. Gnaaah! |
Lawl-ya chapter 2 . 2/15/2014 My god, you made me shed a tear or two ... Honestly, I had to pull myself together to not break out in tears in the middle of the living room with my parents there so I moved to my room and cried those two tears for those two dorks and the few seconds it took me to reach my bed made the difference because my feelings could calm a bit - and I'm endlessly glad that this isn't the end of this fanfiction and that there are gonna be three more chapters to read because I couldn't ever bear such an ending OTL You once again reminded me why I wanted to read The Happy Prince as soon as I finished the No. 6 novels myself. I'd like to thank you for this gorgeous fic though the word doesn't do it justice at all - thank you so much for all these feels (and now I made myself cry again ... You wouldn't believe how often I've cried over those stupid boys since I started the No. 6 manga and finished the anime ... entirely new feelings I experienced thanks to this) |
color2413 chapter 2 . 2/14/2014 Just when I thought that this fandom had faded almost completely away, that fans finished the manga, wondered if there was anything beyond "Beyond," and then moved on, *this* shows up, which is really on another level compared to all but a handful of other No. 6 fanfictions I have read. The sentences are delicious; I'm usually something a of a skimmer, but in this case, I hung on every word. The psychological portrayals feel true and deep, and the writing packs dizzying emotional punch. *Please* don't be discouraged by the lack of dozens of reviews; this is very fine work indeed and selfishly, I want to see it finished. |
Lawl-ya chapter 1 . 1/15/2014 This was beautiful and I hope you get to finish this fic some time ... Thank you |
color2413 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013 If this is awkward and wordy, I definitely want to read your final edit! I thought that it was a fine psychological character study, fresh and confidently written. This goes in my "favorites" and "follows," and I'm not easy to please. I'm looking forward to the work's continuation. |