This is a great story, thanks for writing this!

That was awesome I love it so much your writing is awesome I love it so much!

As much as I enjoyed reading an Aler Rider fanfiction, your story was a bit... too fantastic. Why's Alex never inhibited by his injuries? Does he magically heal in a day? His character is also very inconsistent, not in an unstable way that can be understood because of his experiences, but in a way as in you're having too much going on in life or write too many stories and can't keep up with this one. Overall, it's nice that you write and enjoy it, but you should reconsider writing so much at once. The quality really does suffer. And don't ask for reviews and then be hurt that not everyone wants to vote in your polls, please. As for the last thing, check your writings more often. Your grammar is usually ok, but there are more than just several typos.

My answer to the list of doom!
1...okay...
2. Shoot with a paintball gun
3. Plant a stink bomb
4. Challenge the Cambodian prez to a PVP videogame and rule the area
coffe mugs on random important documents and call it a day
6. Steal it take a selfie (with a cool ninja outfit and mask on) in the bathroom and return it
DO IT!
8. Ansers the phone with aa yoda voice and only say star wars quotes ehileon the line
them out and go hang at their place
10. Threaten to tell the press.

Awww

Wow crys

Want the f*$k

That was great! I love it :) the ending was a bit forced but it was still nice :D
Btw if you ever need help for German translations, just ask ;)

i thinnk you should write about how they would live and how Alex gets kidnapped by the new Scorpia and how his 'Family' has to help fix him and if they can

HURRY! you should do a sequel! i really would like one! what happens and stuff itd be cool

My favourite fanfics that u have written are I'd Lie and Permanent Marker. Keep writhing them.

Hey, Snoweylily!
I do like your story (a lot). The plot is creative and different, and enough happens in every chapter that, even though it's long, your story moves.
There are a couple of things I think you could note that would make your story even better:
Your story has some plot holes (inconsistencies). For example: Alex takes off his shirt earlier, but K-Unit don't see his tattoo?
Your grammar and spelling could use a little work: you're, not your, yeah, not yea, unfortunately and not unforcently.
I do like your story though!

loved it!

NICE CHAPTER LOVE IT SO MUCH...GO ALEX GO ALEX...haha okay i should stop sorry really love the story though

Noooo! You can't end it there ! I love it to much! Btw, I vote Alex rider.