Reviews for Your Smile is What Saved Me
hina-bunny 4 love chapter 5 . 3/3
I don't know how to feel about this story
It hurts knowing that hinata was hurt for over a year
I'm trying to get over it but I do understand why you wrote this story
cespericueta35 chapter 14 . 4/25/2017
OMG please finish this it's so good update soon
saiyanvegeta1648 chapter 14 . 6/25/2016
Wow atleast one Naruhina story where Naruto is not well liked.

And only to this reason it is a good story in my book.

I dont know about others but i think this is how the naruto in manga acted all the time.

He was like
anything for sakura and totally treating hinata like dirt.

So i am at the very least happy to have a Story where there is a chance of him being hated by everyone.

Cause though in canon it wasnt to this extreme level
But still This was how Naruto was all through out canon.

All for sakura and nothing for hinata and abandoning hinata.

He didnt even responded to her confession and outright flirted with his fangirls.

He never thanked her for what she did

Never visited her after neji almost murdered her but she visited him whenever he was in hospital. As shown in filler after sasuke retrieval mission

Never had time for hinata and always hurting her every chance he gets.

So i dont see much of a difference in his character.

Also hinata not trusting Naruto is natural
Its because he didnt give her a reason to trust him.

Also he is thinking way too much of Sakura and treating hinata the way sakura would have liked to be treated. So even though he is with hinata he never let go of his feelings for sakura.

All there reasons only further my hate for Naruto.

Dont get me wrong i do ship naruhina but i do this only cause i want hinata to be happy after all she was the only one who never hated him. And only one who always believed on him.

Naruto on other hand is on top of my bash list followed by orochimaru and sasuke and sakura all three for second position. and then tsunade on third spot on the bash lust.

So in my opinion and i guess in some others too
Naruto got of quite easy without any backlash at him for hurting hinata.

And who the hell does he think himself to be ordering others to leave hinata cause he want to deal himself

It only furthered her agony

Was he trying to show that he was the only one who gave a damn so she shouldnt be angry at him for her hurt/agony.

And he still is too hungup on sakura so i know he will only hurt hinata more if the relationship continued.
guest chapter 14 . 6/1/2016
your hinata kicks ass!
i love her!
please complete the story :D
AvatarUzumaki chapter 14 . 8/13/2015
Great chapter! But hat is te freaking banshee hiding?! And what is her deal with hinata? Will hinata ever trust naruto 100%? And what kind if things did naruto do for Sakura?
Dracomeetgranger chapter 14 . 7/30/2015
Hi.. I love your story. Kinda remind me of my fave korean drama The Innocent Man though lol. Cant wait for the next chapter
larryjc chapter 14 . 7/13/2015
Naruto doesn't make any major effort for Hinata. He rather reminises on his failed relationship with Sakura.
I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.
Hinata seeking the help of her teammates is a good move.
And I want Naruto to also be caught in the crossfire of whatever Hinata plans later on. Maybe mildly, but he should also feel a bit of her anger.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Some shit ass story written by a Sakura hater...tipically. The kinds of you disgust me
Guest chapter 14 . 7/6/2015
i think you should also focus on naruto's efforts on trying to win hinata . defending her (not just listening and witnessing hiashi and sakura insulting her), doing something extraordinary for her (and not just some copy cat he did to sakura before).

if we based this story in the tittle, it should be more about naruto and hinata and how to bring that love again.

i'm sorry but i can't help but think that naruto is just some extra boy in this revenge story thingy, a third party.
sorry but i just want t point that out, hope you're not offended, i'm just trying to say that naruto should have more effort in this story since he is the main char and hinata and about their love.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/6/2015
i don't know but, i think every chap there's only little naruhina conversation there. and when it's naruto pov it's always his flashbacks with sakura together.
Blue-Harts chapter 14 . 7/7/2015
OH MY GOD. BRO...LADY...BUDDY! I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO EXCITED AND ANGRY AT THE SAME TIME. I ROOT FOR HINATA, WANT TO PUNCH SAKURA IN THE FACE, YELL AT NARUTO FOR WHO KNOWS HOW MANY REASONS-I'M JUST ALL OVER THE PLACE.

THIS IS AMAZING AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!

AND I'M SORRY FOR THE CAPS. I'M JUST SO EXCITED!
Serious Sam chapter 14 . 7/6/2015
Oh. My. God. I was so glad to see this chapter and I have to tell you. I'm loving how you're writing Sakura. This is probably one of the most evil, manipulative and vindictive persona's that I've ever seen.

Hiashi, Naruto, hell... even the people she's killed have been used to her advantage. And it's going to be sweeter than sugar when she finally gets taken down by Hinata (and possibly Naruto). Hiashi of course will be caught in the crossfire, because Sakura has been doing it to protect him as well (although it seems like he had no knowledge of that - maybe).

Sakura's move of bringing Hinata back into the compound, and getting Hiashi to spill some personal and rather interesting information on his daughter was a stroke of evil genius. Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer, huh? Although I have to say for Sakura to consider herself Hinata's mother now just makes me want to vomit. Hence the comment above of waiting for the hammer to fall and Sakura gets what she deserves.

Naruto needs to kick Hiashi's ass in the worst way. 'Nuff said. But will he get the opportunity? Or will Sakura push him to the point where he has a heart attack and Sakura takes over running the clan? I can see that being her ultimate goal - the bitch.

I also find it interesting, and rather sad that Hinata confided in Kiba and Shino - mainly because she still doesn't trust Naruto because she thinks he's going to go running back to Sakura (or he's working for her secretly). But I'm glad she has other allies she can turn to now that will help her take down "Lady Hyuga". Between Shino's intelligence and his bugs, along with Kiba's nose it shouldn't take too long for them to get the evidence Hinata needs.

As a writer myself, I know I hate hearing a statement like this, but I really want you to update soon. I recommended this story in my own and I have to say, you certainly don't disappoint.

Fantastic job!
xHinaLovex chapter 14 . 7/6/2015
Don't know how I feel about that forget for one night thing. With everything that's happened it doesn't make sense. And it would just make things worse to wake up the next day, you know?

I just really don't want Naruto falling for her shit anymore and going back to Sakura out of some misguided sense that he would be protecting Hinata. I feel like in this story he shouldn't be that naive anymore. I want him to prove himself to Hinata and I seriously can't wait for Sakura and Hiashi to get what's coming to them.

Yay for team Eight! I'm happy they will be on her side. I always loved that team and thought they had a great bond.
chaosoulg chapter 14 . 7/6/2015
Dunno. Just read from chapter 1 to here and kinda not feeling it. I think the issue I have is you've practically destroyed Hinata's character and the whole uh power level. So, I understand grief can change people. However, you've seen to have created an antithesis to Hinata rather than a grieving Hinata. I know that people can change dramatically, but you also have her displaying her old traits like she's a prepubescent teen who's having hormonal issues with mood swings. I guess what I'm saying is it doesn't really feel like Hinata. It could be any character or even an oc, especially with the way she doesn't even use the juuken. That leads into my second point. Just feel kinda silly Hinata's a bit too capable. She's strong, but to be able to fight so many after how much training? Even taking aside perhaps in your story Naruto wasn't bullshit powerupped like in the manga how did she learn to fight with so many weapons so well in a short amount of time? Motivation didn't really do jackshit for anyone else. I mean between dumb bloodlines like the Sharingan and giant chakra beasts it's not really a contest.
EvilRegalNeoQueen chapter 14 . 7/6/2015
Great story badass hinata!
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