| Reviews for Wal-Mart Romance |
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   ChainsOfSparrows chapter 18 . 3/14/2015 This is a super sweet story, there's a little bit of spelling and grammar mistakes here and there but otherwise it's really good. I do have to say though, having the other characters have no real dialogue can get kind of confusing and bothersome. I have this weird habit where I skim over a large paragraph and so a lot of the time I miss what people are saying because it is not indicated. Other than that though, I really like how cute Jack and Aster are together, and I can't wait to finish the story |
| Wolfisis chapter 24 . 12/29/2014 Oh god I loved this so much the whole thing, I couldnt stop reading it tell I got to the end. I loved the ending of the story so much. |
| That Faggot From Next door chapter 24 . 8/7/2014 ; A ; -Throws rice at the couple- Should make a sweet wedding scene sequel one shot |
| That Faggot From Next door chapter 19 . 8/6/2014 -sniff- ; A ; im sorta jelly |
| That Faggot From Next door chapter 17 . 8/6/2014 ; A ; |
| That Faggot From Next door chapter 12 . 8/5/2014 I WANTED SEX ; A ; |
| Ally chapter 24 . 7/28/2014 This... was great /.\ omg I was so addicted I read non-stop... |
| Wolferix chapter 24 . 6/27/2014 This is one of THE BEST jackrabbit fics I have ever read! Very creative ideas and human portrayals of the Guardians. Love the Bunnymund 'Herd' and the Overland family. Overall, amazing story! wolf93ee |
| dae.lyn.7 chapter 20 . 6/3/2014 This was good, there were some areas that I would have enjoyed a bit of an expansion on but overall it was very well done in my opinion. |
| Crawling Elf a.k.a. ZIM chapter 24 . 5/21/2014 This was amazing; I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the characters mostly Bunny he was awesome. Also how naturally their relationship evolved, it felt so real, I loved it. I'm not usually into AU fics but this one was fantastic; you only had a couple typos and a bit of grammar to polish, maybe you could use a beta. Other than that it was perfect. Kudos and please keep writing. |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/15/2014 I really love this! Grammar could use some work, but I don't mind. Very interesting. I love Jack's outfit too. Anonymous The Nobody(main account) |
| PippaFrost chapter 24 . 4/14/2014 NOOOOOOO! WHY DOES PERFECTION ALWAYS HAVE TO COME TO AN END?! I NEED MORE! PLEASEEEEEEEE I'M BEGGING YOU! I FREAKING LOVED THIS AND I LOVE YOU ! YOU DARN FLUFF GODESS! *crying* I NEED MORE ROMANCE AND DRAMA AND CUTE AND FLUFF! |
| PippaFrost chapter 23 . 4/14/2014 WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME?! THIS CANNOT AND I REPEAT CANNOT END! NEVER! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! |
| PippaFrost chapter 19 . 4/14/2014 AGH! UGH! MY HEART!... OW! THE FEELS! I'M DYING OF FEELS! |
| PippaFrost chapter 14 . 4/14/2014 OH MY GOD I'M ACTUALLY SQUEALING ! |
