| Reviews for Barely Breathing |
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Bethesda551 chapter 14 . 6/11 oi! young and the restless been watching that with my mom for 16 years, great story |
StupidChinaBook chapter 6 . 4/11 How many more C.S.I episodes are you going to do Hawaii 5 O 2010 fics of |
StupidChinaBook chapter 2 . 3/8 Is this a Hawaii 5 O 2010 version of the CSI episodes Buried Emotions |
Marian Simonetti chapter 9 . 11/19/2019 This chapter was amazing...I also have a fear of bugs and I still remember watching that CSI episode when the coffin started cracking...totally freaked me out...great job...freaked out again and not even watching it... |
Marian Simonetti chapter 14 . 11/18/2019 I don't always review each chapter but the story was so well done and I had seen this on CSI and it was my favorite episode..youvdid an amazing job and I liked that you added the hospital ,and recovery at Steve's...Well Done...I will read it again... |
brandywine737 chapter 2 . 7/27/2019 This is the exact same plot as the CSI episode. I understand being inspired by an episode, but this is too similar to the CSI episode to even read. Like nothing is changed from that episode but the names. |
Guest chapter 14 . 2/4/2017 This was just great! Thank you so so much for this! 3 |
Margomls chapter 14 . 10/11/2016 Loved this fic! My favorite CSI episode with my favorite detective ! Thank you for writing it! Margo |
midnight1thunder1storm1 chapter 8 . 4/20/2016 This is starting to remind me of a movie I saw with my dad, it is called "buried alive", and I didn't like the ending at all |
WeirdyMcWeirderton chapter 9 . 2/6/2016 Love this story! I was crying so hard when Danny was saying his goodbyes and then when he got to Steve... that was the worst. But this was very well written! |
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 14 . 5/29/2015 Nice ending Danny having his work family/friends by him. He is a lucky guy. |
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 9 . 5/29/2015 OMG! I was in tears with his goodbyes they were all so sad and heartfelt. Good job! |
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 5/28/2015 Like that you are taking certain CSI episodes and making them h50 ones. I loved this CSI ep. Nick was my favorite. |
Lamarquise chapter 11 . 5/9/2015 This is...well...rather out there on a limb. You can't switch out dirt for a person-not quickly or precisely enough to fool a decent bomb. Suddenly there's a limit on the amount of air left when the system was evidently designed to provide air via a fan though nothing should have changed or was mentioned to have changed except blowing out the light? And suddenly keeping the light on turns off the air when that wasn't mentioned before? And why would Danny shoot himself? It wouldn't really save any suffering and if his air situation were really bad there'd be lots of CO2 build-up that would make him drowsy and finally knock him out. He wouldn't be able to think that clearly. |
BeenThereSeen It chapter 5 . 4/16/2015 You've totally stripped the original CSI episode, a lot of it sounds word for word except for a few necessary character changes. Very disappointed. |