And then like I secretly was there taking a video of Jane and Loki kissing so I can bribe Jane in the future. XD

I have loved reading this story! The way you write these characters - with such nuance, intricacy, and thoughtfulness - has been a joy to unravel. I do hope that you will one day come back to this story and continue where you left off.

Omg I didn't even know you were still updating this, I know it's 2020 and the last update was in 2019 but I only just read it now and it has really cheered me up. I've been self isolating for months now and I was feeling really down so I wanted to read one of my favourite fan ficts and I've decided to read yours. What a nice surprise to find a new chapter that I didn't even expect to be there! Thank you so much!

Nicely done, from beginning to end! I anxiously await the concluding chapters!

Thank you for writing this. I powered through it today and was sad to see it end in this cliffhanger. If you ever decide to come back to it you’ve got one reader right here!

Hello Sorrow Reminisce,

I just started reading your fic and am intrigued. I'm usually a Thor/Jane fan, but the slow exploration and development of the relationship between Jane and Loki has found me eager to see where and how you plan to take this further. Some more Thor/Jane moments would make this more believable though in that I think that Jane, in times of confusion or danger, would naturally gravitate towards Thor as someone she trusts and is more certain of.

Hope you continue and post the next chapter soon!

I just found your story and it is incredible, don't have any doubt about that! Your writing is amazing, the way you describe and not to mention how you keep Loki in character! Pleeeeeese continue updating!

This is coming together real nice.I can see where its heading and I'm loving it!

I am enjoying this story and do hope you continue it. It doesn't matter that you haven't updated in a while. Please keep updating, it is so much fun reading the interactions between Loki, Jane and Thor.

Hey at least figuratively you're dousing the fire between Jane & Thor. And now what are your thoughts about Endgame?

I'm reading your story. I just discovered your story. And it's good so far. Sometimes, it's not the destination but the journey. If you're going to make this romantic Lokane, this slowburn is good. I hate the stories where Jane cheats on Thor or Thor is a big asshole. I think Thor: Ragnarok changed up perceptions of Thor to be a F%kboi. Or a jock!slut and Loki's a neglected misunderstood sweetheart. Neither are true in the comics I think? And Jane isn't the type to cheat or go behind someone's back. For any reason. Just my rant.

Never doubted Loki - because that was not a very good scare. Especially when he wasn't ever there to enjoy Jane's scared reaction

Never think you are a crap writer. I like a different portrayl of Loki? or Jane or Thor? That's on me. You write very well and if I feel you could have gone a different way then that's on me- my opinion as a reader.

Poor writing is when your reader is yawning through your story (ok they might be tired doesn't mean you're a poor writer) and you are making so many spelling mistakes they're not typos.

I love your charecterisation of Loki. He's a big shit and not the most golden or even silvery of people.

Que bueno que volvió a escribir ojalá y termine el fic, ojalá jane aprenda a confiar en loki y arregle su relación pronto con thor