I hate having to correct grammar and spelling when I'm trying to fap.

Hi

Frogadier and Lucario's?

Next, make a greninja x grovyle please!

Do Fraxure (btm) and Mienshao (top)

The Nidoling was perfect,But the Machoke wasent he should have been a Machamp...

It makes since how two fire types mate but not really the charmeleon walking on all fours and it would make more since if the charmeleon was a charizard.

You should press space twice.

Cool story! Love it!

IN CHAPTER 2 YOU SHOULD DO A THREESOME OF CHARMELEON, FLAREON, AND A QUILAVA OR ANOTHER FIRE TYPE PKMN ON 4 LEGS!

yes please more!

Heh, when I read your little note at the bottom of the story I had to snicker because at the time you wrote this chapter you were sick and now when I read this I'm sick. How's that for irony

no offense meant but I think that the word you want is ENgorged not INgorged

I'd probably edit the description. It's not cancelled due to "repetitive plotlines", it's cancelled because you ran out of ideas for plotlines.

- I kind would've likeda mention that Krokorok's tail went over Weavile's shoulder as they mated or something. I mean, the tail hole is /below/ the tail, right?

Anyway, still cool stuff.

- *feels like choking Pokekid for saying a Nidoqueen can reproduce* Only NIDORAN[FEM] can reproduce out of the three female forms of Nido-'s! It's pedophilic, but still! That's just how the game works.

- Yeah, uhm... Machoke doesn't have a tail, so it wouldn't be considered a 'tailhole'. Maybe you could've mentioned something about moving the shorts and belt, though?

- Sorry if that was a bit rude. I just wanted to get those things straight so you knew them.