I'm reading this for the second time round and only now I'm noticing typos. the main one being defiantly instead of definitely. Story is otherwise excellent it's just when I see this it pulls me out of it. otherwise please keep up the good work.

This is so cool! I am really getting into the story, great job in keeping me entertained. I am really looking forward to how this baby plays out!

I am impressed, this is a really fun read...keep up the fine work.

Gettin' fun now! This is AWESOME!

Fricking cool! This is a great story...I am glad that I found your GOT story so that I could read this one. I like your writing style.

Nice, I like how you are adding some of the best "Predator" lines into it! Keep up the great work! Fun story, so far!

aw man I'm so into it right now. I can't wait for the next chapter

Please keep going on this story. It is a work of art.

Alright, great to see this updated. You make take a while to update (who am I to complain?) but when they come they are pretty good :D A smaller chapter than most but well received nonetheless.

So not much happens action-wise, more of the fallout of the fight and the results. A small reprieve for the heroes and their forces. And damn did they need it. Although against are maybe thousands of Black Yautja...yeah, they're going to need a miracle. So the revelation of Blair's actions is revealed and now with Sophie in enemy hands, things just keep on looking darker and darker. And poor Sophie... not liking her odds here. One of the Black Yautja wants to kill her, another wants to rape her. Not gonna lie, I'm very afraid she may not hold out long.
Oh god... Wow, Eli's reaction to Rezeal's body burst open was worse than I thought. And the way he keeps saying that this new Xenomorph (ReaperMorph, was it?) is something they simply cannot hope to take on? Yep, you really have a knack of making hopeless situations turn even more hopeless, Dakkaman. I applaud you.

So...the core was reached and turns out Eli knows exaclty how it works. And we finally know what it is, and that Eli views with unadulterated fear and horror. A void ship. Something tells me it isn't of Kamad-origin, what with his fear.
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Oh.
Oh shit. Dude. Your hint from last year finally makes sense. Oh my god. OH MY GOD. Oh they are SO FUCKED.

Dude, that was a great cliffhanger. Great chapter overall, just a few grammar/punctuation errors. Holy shit, next chapter CANNOT come fast enough. You have no idea how excited I am right now! Keep up the great work. Here's to the next chapter *raises glass*

Wow, you sure do know how to make a reappearance, don't you? Great chapter, eagerly but patiently awaiting more.

I just got caught up with the story, I got to say there were things I liked and there were things I didn't like.
I like the action and the suspense you had and the characters were easy to identify. And the characters were all distinct from one another which was great and the writing was smooth and very easy to follow along. But I got to say I'm not a big fan of the Kamad, I just think they are overpowered. I don't see how they haven't conquered the universe yet. And I think the characters formed relationships to quickly, and sometime act too casual. This is just my opinion though, I still liked the fic.

Well done. As they say you cant rush a good thing. Also nice refrence with the dancing xeno. Made me lagh. When you left and wornt coming back i was scared the story was scraped. I was almost off the hook until my phone said. Hey! New chapter for the axhlesiphuss? Whatever the names a typo anyhow. And it took me a sec to understand befor i went: oh sh*t dood! This is a fun and awsome story that gives me dreams. Good ones. And i cant wait for the next bacouse that last cliffhanger got my hart racin at 10:00 pm. Im exited to hear discriptions of the teased "reaper" what a void ship is and why it scares eli shitliss (misspeled so no need of sencers.) ( side posible theory: elis people made the voidship to distroy soler systums. Realized thats a bad idea and bind it. Then humans came N said ey this is ours now!) what happens to grey and freinds. When do the starstruck lovers all kiss in unison? WHEN DO THE XENOS REALIZE THAIR ALL FUC*IN TWATS AND GROW A CONSIENS! WHEN DOES THE COW JUMP OVER THE MOON AND WHY AM I SCREEMING!. PS: you asked for long you got long. I hope you enjoyed my self entertainment rant. Hehehe.

Oh a Spaceballs reference.

welcome back man! hope things are going good for you on your end.

Nice little recuperation piece here, a chance to calm down after that battle from the previous chapter. not to mention setting the scene for the final battle that would decide the fate of the ship and those who dwell on it.

little postulation here. does the 'Void Ship' have anything to do with singularities? Black holes?

Good to see you back in action Dakkaman. this chapter was fantastic and I can't wait to see the reapermoth in action. I also like the reference to the spaceballs movie