| Reviews for The Most Ancient and Most Noble House of Potter and Black |
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   waya715 chapter 7 . 5/27 You have written a wonderful story! Please continue on with it. kudos! |
| furface294 chapter 7 . 4/5 You have an interesting concept here but for Merlin's sake get a damn Beta PLEASE! |
| Pinklizsmom chapter 1 . 3/5 sorry I couldn't read this. It looked interesting, but too many word choice and spelling errors. |
| princess2019 chapter 7 . 11/24/2019 more please |
| Lunarmon chapter 7 . 10/28/2019 Interesting story looking forward to see what happens next but there sure was a LOT of misspelling and mistakes. Hope you get better at that with time or find someone to help proofread it. _ |
| Packer82 chapter 7 . 6/3/2019 Great story hope another update comes soon |
| FlowerChild23 chapter 7 . 5/23/2019 Holy cow. HE is EVIL. |
| Millie072 chapter 7 . 5/21/2019 Intriguing plot line. After reading the reviews, I expected a true mess. The first chapter is not too bad, but the quality of the work went steadily downhill. You need a beta or a friend who is a fanfic reader with good to excellent English skills. Bringing in Neville when you did was a nice touch. His character is so frequently overlooked. Keep him increasingly strong, both emotionally and politically. Physically will come naturally. The meeting between Susan & Daphne should be interesting to say the least. Will you bring Hannah in for Neville to solidify the political network? When does Dumbledore discover both Harry & Neville have taken up their Lordships? Next chapter is eagerly awaited. Thanks |
| Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 4/17/2019 Excellent! |
| lou2003us chapter 7 . 3/31/2019 I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
| Fallow55 chapter 7 . 3/29/2019 xx kudos xx : ) |
| Zicou chapter 7 . 3/21/2019 The plot in itself is good, that fiction could be good, but your spelling/grammar is atrocious and make it very hard on the eyes, you really should ask for a beta, or 5 :) z/ |
| Derraj chapter 1 . 3/21/2019 Your grammar is terrible. |
| HPandPJO4ever chapter 7 . 3/20/2019 This is really good! I can't wait for the next update! |
| Rin2x chapter 7 . 3/20/2019 The problem I'm having is that it's very hard to read with all the spelling and grammatical errors. Hopefully you can find someone to beta for you because the story itself is very good, and I'm looking forward to seeing where the plot goes. |
