ah! It would have been easy for John to do all the cleaning by himself! Sherlock! sherlock! sherlock!

I am still laughing over "this is the least fancy thing i have to wear'

I am so jealous that you can keep your sherlock in character. He never does for me.

Did anyone, including John, actually think that Sherlock was going to help clean?!

I literally laughed out loud when John was imagining a nice day with Sherlock in 221b then you just went 'Ohhh it is just a dream'. Also, Sherlock being scared about a paper cut but being able to survived a gun shot is very funny. And a mixture of maple syrup and blueberry jam etc? I used to think I would be fun to live in 221b with the boys, but now I would prefer to live alone. XD

The ending to this was so cute! I can just see Sherlock with his bandaged finger.

Oh my God, who knew Sherlock was a wuss to paper cuts! ;)

This really is a funny little story. I had to laugh soo much while reading it. ;) I think you've done extremely well, especially on the characters. They are both quite realistic. I can really imagine the situation to be just like you wrote it, it's hilarious! :D