Please... Continue this story! It's totally awesome... I need an ending to this...
It's been forever since you wrote this but please!

Awesome story! Can't wait to read Part Two!

Keep typing! :)

You literally have not updated SINCE 2013
IT IS NOW ALMOST 2016
srsly i dont wanna be rude- this is a v good story and ur a good author- but PLS UPDATE OTHERWISE TELL ME NOT TO HANG ONTO LOOSE STRANDS

Its been WAY too long since you updated, and i am desperate to read moreeeee coz i love the story so frikking much. PLEASSSEEEE UPDATE SOON.

Its been aggggeess since you updated, and i reallyy want to read moreeeee co i love the story so frikking much. PLEASSSEEEE UPDATE SOON.
Thannnxxx
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Its been aggggeess since you updated, and i reallyy want to read moreeeee co i love the story so frikking much. PLEASSSEEEE UPDATE SOON.
Thannnxxx
sunsetsmiles

Gosh, please don't tell me that Alec was assaulted in Turin. It makes sense, he shies away from touch like someone in fear but still...

I like how you progressed this relationship. It's still a quick moving relationship by real life standards; however, they kissed right after they set whether they could be together or not. It takes a certain level of communication and trust to keep these realtionships. And since this is only part one, I don't know (I might never find out) if that actually worked.

Speaking of which, I can't wait for Alec to either invest in a coach who isn't his own father or learn to be indipendent. He must be itching to distance himself from the fear of both coming out to his dad and still having to live in the same house afterwards.

Magnus and Alec sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g! I think they are crushing on each other now, adorable! And so you've got a tumblr I guesstimate? Hm I shall be sure to find it! But I'm sad because I don't know what's happening in chapter 8 and you haven't updated in a while after that. But still, my friend and I had a great time reading this so thanks for making it so awesome! I'm not actually sure what to write for this chapter other than the fact that your got Jace's sassiness just right so keep up the good work!

I think I giggled too hard during this. It was so fucking sweet and I just love how nervous Alec was and then how MAGNUS was being so sweet. It was also really cool because I totally knew where they were in the tower and the scene because I've been there before. But in like 2009! But omg I'm getting close to th last update so far. Update soon? Please? Also, I really liked the fans of Magnus. I was just laying here like (I seriously only read these laying down) oh my god these people are just like me! And then the "God he's hot." Beautiful. I missed a bunch of things I should have put in here a while ago. First, k was your 100th reviewer yay! Although I think this deserves 1000 reviews! Uh I forgot the rest but I just wanted to say how my friends and I always talk about your fanfic at school. In fact, I'm going to recommend it to a friend tomorrow! As always, keep up the good work!

I nearly pissed my pants at "You have no idea how Asian that makes you look." And the worst part was that I was reading this at like 3 AM and I had to silent laugh oh my god that was pure genius! But again, I was blushing with Alec this whole time because so hella cute and so hella adorable and just perfection! Magnus has the ultimate flirting skills. But I noticed he seems to almost get hit by cars in this chapter… coincidence? Perhaps not! But as always, keep up the good work!

Hnnnnnggg. I'm actually really upset because I was supposed to read this Friday and then family stuff you know, thanks giving and whatnot. Oh, happy thanks giving by the way. I think it'll be late by the time you see this. I don't know if you actually will. BUT ANYWAY! This was so cute. I actually loved this chapter, filler or not. I loved how Alec walked right pass Magnus and didn't see him and I love how they open up to each other, so cute. As always, keep up the good work!

Ahhhh! another great chapter! This one actually took me longer to read for whatever reason but asdfghjkl; is my reaction. Also, everyone was so rude in this chapter! I was just sitting down reading all this rude. haha but still, i was somewhat waiting for a canadian joke and got it! it's cool that you're canadian, I am too. It's a small world after all in'nit? I actually don't know what to say about this other than Keep up the good work!

okay i'm gonna be honest here, i started reading this chapter without my friend last night because this was so amazing and i needed more! but then i fell asleep. i didn''t read more until she woke up so we could read together but once again, amazing work! My emotions were really brought out here and I actually was embarrassed and blushing for is so magnificent and I would love to write more and give feedback (i don't think you did anything wrong) but my friend wants to read the next chapter! Oh, and also. it feels so cool that they're in toronto. I live close to there so this feels close to home. Keep up the good work.

Oh man this was an amazing first chapter! My friend and I were screwing around and decided to read malec fanfics and then she was like 'do we read the complete one or the incomplete one?" and i was like "i dunno let me check which one is cooler" and i saw that yours was an AU and i was like "We are reading this one right now." ahhh i'm so glad i found this because i love the way you use the characters and i love the storyline so far and it's just ASDSGHGLJK please keep up the good work! I'm kinda upset though because I can't actually read chapter 2 until tomorrow because my friend didn't want me to read it without her. I definitely look forward to the next one though!

Are you still working on that story? Because Id really like to read more of it, its really well written and I usually dont like AUs that much, but yours really won me over. Please keep it up! :)