Wow...there was no build up or anything you just went strait for it lol I was hoping for character progression atleast a little. Peter's just a pervert who takes girls from their homes?...I mean I guess. You're the writer.

This book is amazing! I felt like I was actually reading the original Peter Pan book, while seeing the characters from the movie or movies. Peter kept having red hair quite often, like in the Disney version even thought the face kept being the 2003 one. And even though I am a little dissapointed that we didn't hear anything about the birth and all, I at the same time can not imagine, this book ending any better. Nope. This is perfect. Thank you for the awesome read. I am so happy I decided to read it. So happy that I decided to put the filter on M and not K-T or I would not have found this book.

Damn! I had no idea how this would be like and ... God I feel high!
This is so intense and flustering and oh gawd this is hot!
Oh boy ... what did I get into?!
Still incredible!

I loved this fanfiction it was amazing especially chapter 18 I can't believe Peter got her pregnant because she's given him everything so he gave her everything she wanted. I loved this sooooo much Peter is the sweetest.

Awesome

Nice. :)

... Vicky needs to go home. Now. :(
(Wow, loving this intrigue and drama!)

... give 'em hell, Peter!

"We don't rape women. "
I'm sorry, then what was that the other day?
Peter, I'm fine if this is Neverland XXX, but don't feed me shit and tell me it's ice cream. _

[This is a comment to the characters, not the writer. Writing is great! If I don't like something I just stop reading, and I'm still reading. :) ]

Um, well...I think some parts were a bit much, and I didn't really understand what was exactly happening because there was so much distractions...but, I got a laugh out of one of the last things Wendy said in Chapter 18 and how Peter responded. Other than that, I was very...disgusted?

Really good story. You did an amazing job writing this. The perfect amount of everything. :)

Dear god... this story... dear lord, when did I lose the use of my vocabulary?! T_T

That was awesome!

This is amazing.

"A child cannot have a child" ?
Do you by any chance watch Once Upon A Time?