the end was so rude

Omg what. Whatwhatehagwhags

DDD: I LOVE THIS BUT IT'S SO SAD WHY DO I GO ABOUT BREAKING MY OWN HEART READING THESE IDK BUT I DO

Wow... My heart broke when I read the last line. Great writing! :)

I feel empty after reading this fic. It's written perfectly. You're an amazing writer. Very well done!

*gross sobbing*
this is beautiful

Wow. You don't understand how much I love this

Oh my gosh, that was so adorable and cute and then the ending. Gahhh.

Great writing. :D

No, no, no. You did not just give me the baby plot. Now I shall go curl up in the corner and cry and die. This is ...oh I can't. Super thumbs up!

I find it kind of funny how just over one-thousand words can make me cry like that! Aww, that was so cute and fluffy yet very deep and sad that I'm very confused, but impressed too! I wish I'd have picked up on the illusion a little sooner though, my heart is really hurting right now
But well done on that, really! c:

I read this on tumblr, I'm guessing you're pensivebanana? :D I left you an anon message there, but I know how it feels to get review on fanfiction so here you go!

Anyways, I loved it. I was all "ahh yessss, a cure for my soul" at the beginning and then SMASH SMASH SMASH SOUL NO LONGER EXISTS. Your fic has destroyed me, leaving me with a mixture of emotions and longing for more Rivetra. *sniff* keep doing what you do!

I definitely read this today in tumblr! It was so surreal and beautiful! I just can't get enough of your stories! Loved it! As well as "Experimenting" from tumblr (; lol. Amazing jobs as always!