That hair cut scene was one of the sexiest scenes in the movie... so playful, so loving, so sexy!

Great story. Wish you would return to and/or kind of wrap it up or continue it at least through the first full year of their marriage...

Gosh, I just LOVED this story. So easy to read. I just realised that you have finished it 4 years ago. That is just so sad. I wish I would have more chapters to look forward to. So many questions still need an answer. Still, great job and thank you for the great story!

I’m loving this story, I tried to go on the Pinterest page and it just brought up a bunch of fifty shades related stuff. How do I get there?

éste es el final de la historia?

This is one of my all-time favorite Fifty Shades Trilogy variations. This story has a bit of everything: Ana as a business owner, Christian immediately knocked for six, a better relationship with Elliot, and it doesn't hurt that he's already easing away from Elena. So, most of my guilty pleasure itches have been scratched.

Wish you would finish this story

That girl should be ashamed all of them by the way. No decent woman will comment about their sex life like that to anyone or websites. But he had it coming too.

So sweet! I tested up at the “I’m no longer lonely”

THE BEST!
You are fantastic at getting to the mind, heart and soul of your (better) characters. Love how smart yet human Ana is, and how dominant yet romantic and vulnerable CG is. That’s what love does to you make you weak n strong, terrified and invigorated.

We should all have a Devin in our life!

And you know great sex ;) XO

This is my re-read and since I commented originally when logged it, it won’t let you comment again so I logged out to let you know how much I’ve enjoyed evty bit of the 900k words.

I've just re-read your fantastic story, and enjoyed it just as much second time around. Thank you.
It would be wonderful to read more if you ever felt like writing again. So much to find out. Elenas's trial, Kate's wedding, Carla's visit, and a baby?

Christian is in contradiction with what he loves. Says vanilla sex is the best he ever had but want to add part of his precedent lifestyle with Ana if she is so different. I just don’t understand that in all stories not just yours. Can you give me a little explanation please maybe I will understand then

They are really fucking a lot and she just lost her virginity. Ain’t she sore?

Love the story & re reading again, but I don’t get why you don’t just have Ana have a baby.. I feel so sorry for Christian... that’s all he ask of her... he gives her everything. All she have to do is give him a baby. Something that is his flesh and blood. It’s not as if they can’t afford help and have no money. I feel Ana is very selfish here. Sad!

Very tough chapter. Ana has been through so much yet her thoughts and caring are still about Christian. I hate that he is so self centered that everything is about him. Yes he thinks about Ana but as apiece of his salvation. She is his everything because she comforts him. He’s anger that she might’ve pregnant, his blaming her for not going on the shot, his use of her body after his feelings of self loathing at his parents house. It’s al about him. As I’ve felt in all of the FiftyShades of Grey stories he is an e optional adolescent. Yes Elena has much to blame for that but he’s 28, he’s had years of therapy yet he accomplishes nothing through it because he listens but doesn’t hear. He chooses not to change.

His statement that after using her body last night he knows for sure that he doesn’t need or want the harsh stuff anymore, as he’s been telling her all along and now he’s proven it to himself just shows that he really just tells her what he knows she wants and needs to hear.

That said she isn’t perfect either, she needs to tell him about the sub club (but has she really even had time?), she is strong and generally calls him his shit but she needs to do it more fervently and more often.

Outstanding chapter, outstanding story.