Bro ur very great at making these please make a new chapter nowww but ill understand if ur busy tho im just hyped :D

Bro are u working on a new chapter now cuz i really like it

Actually, this is the shortest prologue that I have read in a fic get, the last one was 4 chapter long.
Also, your charaterization of the Mcs, altough common in fics is working really good, and shortening the prologue BEST. IDEA. EVER. it actually improved the original script.

Let me Guess, FMC was trapped in a videogame for 2 years?

Decent story. Truth be told, I'm the slightest bit iinquisitive as to Thanatos' recent actions along with Minato's personaes' restlessness...

This was a great chapter! I can definitely see you giving the characters more depth and I can't wait for an Asuna chapter! Please update soon!

what is the pairing in this story?

I like this story so far and I look forward to seeing where you take this story and how Minato developes. Please update soon!

This is a great story so far! Personally, I think the hospital scene was cute.

I'd like to see this fanfiction continue, I like where you're going with this so far! In fact, this is the fanfiction I "referred" to when I started off mine!

Liking it, and loving it when you continue updating!

Intresting,but why you give the name of female protagonist as asuna yuuki?

Asuna Yuuki? From SAO? I wish you hadn't named her that because now I can't stop imagining the FeMC as the wrong character _
Aside from that, interesting so far...

hmm... is it just me... or does the first Tartarus exploration seem a bit... short... probably just me... I remember it being quite long and the only reason is that Mitsuru is explaining the basics of combat... anyway... you corrected the mistake that I mentioned... it makes me both happy and sad... happy that I managed to help... sad that when people now read my previous comment... they'll think I'm an idiot for mentioning something that wasn't wrong... anyway another great chapter and keep up the good work...

bring a box of doughnuts to class... and suddenly everyone is your best friend...

well... I liked the hospital scene between Asuna and Minato... but I felt like there was something odd about that scene... nothing bad... just odd... I can't quite put my finger on it... but still... I think it was a great scene nonetheless... and also I would like to inform you that you missed a word... in the part near the end where they were talking about going to tartarus for the first time in the evening... when Ikutsuki was talking you wrote "Since we're dealing with Shadows, Tartarus isn't we can avoid."... just add the word "something" in it and it will be perfect... that aside it was another great chapter so keep up the good work

If doughnuts rule the world... what would happen if their overlord turned out to be a bagel in disguise... THINK OF THE DRAMA!

I really like this! I like the different styles, the telling of the whole story and the interactions, especially between Minato and Asuna. I also think you have everyones personalities spot on so far. I look forward to the next chapters.