This need more review, continue!

Good! continue please!

Really enjoyed the fluidity of this piece, and how it gave Lin an extra dimension. As well as Pema.

in the avatar world the legal adult age is 16. i know this because yue was of marrying age at 16 and if ur o;d enough 2 get married im pretty sure ur old enough 2 b counted as an adult

;uhegeh. I seeeee. This is interesting. Seeing Lin's side of that. urgieahgi. This is SO neat! 33 .rguilaeghg. I love it! I'm sure it's 16-17. Something around there probably. I've struggled with legal age because I want to write so much for this fandom and little things make me fret over should I? Shouldn't it? Or what about that? Very nice. This is just...I LOVE Lin 3. Beifong feels. 3 TERRIFIC! You are super talented and I look forward to seeing so much from you. Thanks for writing this! 3