Annnnd I still want a rory of my own...

Loved this story! I always like it when Rory feels a little insecure around the Doctor, only to find out there's nothing to be worried about.
Thanks for writing it! :D

Poor Rory! Competing with the Doctor - how could anyone do that? You really captured the voices of all the characters; good job with that.

I liked the ending. You do have to wonder - how can anything ever be a rush job when you're in a time machine?

I can't believe it took me so long to read this story. It was fabulous and lovely and heart wrenching and covered all the right areas. If any of these stories had been on the show, I think they would've played out exactly like this. This was so fantastically done, I've run out of words to say how awesome it is and how I hope you do something else a lot like it.

This was dope. You've got a great handle on Rory's voice and his insecurities at the start of his run. Really nice work.