Very nice. I really love how you write Kido, and you capture the bleakness of her horrible situation well. I always prefer death fic where the dying person's last thoughts are more of their loved ones over fic where the focus is on the specifics of their own (often gruesome) death. Just makes it a little more emotional, ya know? But the details you added are a nice touch, too! They strengthen the tone instead of taking away from how Kido is feeling.

Nice work!

This was so sad. The feels ;-; I didn't understand a small part but it was well written, especially how kido still wanted to protect them