This was amazing and so funny. I love this story. Is their going to be a sequel?

Hi! It’s been a longggg time since I last read your story but I’m so glad I found it again! I just wanted to let you know that I’m so glad you kept writing and that this story was extremely well written.
Hope things are well with you!

My boggart would Probably be the fear of dying... , Im loving the story thought ;)!

Uh... It was nearly a year ago that this chapter was posted; is this story still going? You can't just leave us hanging there, with no end in sight?

Waiting eagerly for an update
Kat

Remus x Jordan?

This is exciting. It been wanting to read a stoy of an OC and this starts durin her 7th year ! Exciting !

hell no! she was accepting him he should get over his what is practically self harm!

Sigh.

Look. I know It's fan fiction and all that, but... seriously? They just left Remus to the wolves, so to speak!? I do not question that he would try to be left behind, but I'm having serious trouble digesting the fact that the Marauders would let him. Even if it was Voldemort himself, Sirius and James would have turned back and fought, rather than leave a man behind, and so would Lily! What was the point of that conversation behind the portrait, if they were going to go back out three minutes later anyway!?

Also, you are aware the common room is on the seventh floor? Regulus chased them all the way from the lake, up the moving staircases to the seventh floor and decided to only pull out a wand at the exact moment they were trying to enter the Gryffindor Tower? And not one teacher saw this? Yes, it's a Sunday, but they passed through the entire school, I imagine they went by at least one or two. No students noticed either? And the Marauders, that know every nook and crannie in the school, didn't think of anywhere else they could hide, any secret passageways they could use to give him the slip?

I'm not trying to be harsh. It's just that things that stretch my suspension of disbelief so much I have to write two paragraphs about it, really take me out of the story. I know you had ideas for the characters and that you wanted certain things to happen, but you just should have thought this through a bit more. For example, it could have been only Jordan and Remus that were trying to get away, and he pushed her in. And they were, let's say on the fifth floor, or something. As it is, like Jordan said, why was saving anyone even on the table?

Mary and Sirius!

Sounds like a mix of the Black Pearl's curse and The Precioussss...

NO! it cant be almost over yet! *whimper*
Probably Disney or black sisters.

NO IT CANT BE OVER YET!

This was great! I want to see a little more romance between Remus and Jordan and maybe a confrontation between the Maurauders and the Death Eater Wannabees

I love this story so far, honestly! I would definitely read even more stories if you wrote them! I also love that Remus is the love interest its solo cute

They will probely be like WHAT? I imagine Sirius throwing a fit