nice

Let me start by telling you that you are the bestest person ever and I love love love you WITH ALL MY HEART! Flaws is like my favorite song ever, well Top 10 because I cant choose a fave, BUT THIS IS PERFECTION. I LOVE IT. MARRY ME PLEAAASSEEEE!

Although the wording bothered me in some places, I do love the pacing and how you used it to showcase the sentiment. I like how, despite the shortness of the story, you illustrated their individual personalities. It really made the broader concept stand out even more.
Good work!
Wings xx

For some reason this just made me giggle. A lot. Maybe it's because I kept seeing chibi's of these two running around my head? Love the story anyways.