I love this story, it's super well written

I really miss this story. Did it get posted elsewhere?

I’ve been re-reading this story for a while, always hoping for an update. It’s really good, I especially liked how for chapter 36 Cloud was getting around to the fact that the Sephiroth Zack is friends with is not at fault. I’m not ready to give up on this and I hope that you have the time and the motivation to continue this story at some point. Until then I’ll keep hoping.

I don't feel a connection between Cloud and Zack at all and I keep asking,why should I care about this pairing?" I love Zack/ Cloud pairings but in this story I don't care about either of them

great story, hope you can get back to it someday :)

If you're going to make this a Z/C/A fic you need to label this as such. You only said that that particular pairing only gets a 'special' mention but now you're hinting that you're going to add that later on in the story. I hate stories with more than two people in the relationship and you focus too much on the third party for me to enjoy reading this even though I did quite enjoy the story line. Overall, not a bad plot and excellent writing, but all of that is ruined by the expectations set from the beginning.

Nooooo don't tell me Aeris is going to come back into the relationship.

mein kleiner Wolf* since it's der Wolf and not die Wolf

The emphasis on the threesome relationship is a little strange because I was expecting a sole relationship between Zack and Cloud. You focus a bit too much on it for a fic that's not in the romance section. I still enjoy reading this... just a little awkward because I don't like Aeris with Cloud since I've always felt those two 'loved' each other only because of Zack.

Happy Thanksgiving!

This fic is pure awesomeness! The characters, their interactions, the plot... I absolutely LOVE it ALL!

POOR SEPH! I hope he gets to be a hero sometime.

YAY, YUFFIE!
And I'm glad Zack & Seph are now friends. Hopefully, the General won't become a TOTAL basketcase.
(I prefer Sephiroth over Angeal coz the latter betrayed Zack by having his student kill him, though I am pissed at Seph for torching Nilbeheim.)

I just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know how much I enjoyed reading your story. if you ever come back and pick this up again, I would love to know how the story will unfold. Seems like you had a lot of plans and ideas too. Great job on this and I wish you the best!

Hello, I just finished reading your story, and was wondering if you had just stopped writing fanfiction entirely, or had just gotten to caught up with real life to spare a thought to it. I also really wanted you to know that your story might be one of the better ones that I've read, and I really hope you can try and finish it.

You should totally continue this, I love it. Especially the last scene with the chocobo.
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