This is so sexy! I have to say this is one of the sexiest fic I ever read for Fairy Tail that involve *snicker* creative use of Juvia's watery body XDDD

hohooooo too bad there is no more... It would deserve a LOOONG sequel ;) I would like to see their emotional development. c:
anyway GOOD WORK! *v*

sequel please

Normally I'd roll right over a story without any capitalization... but somehow this one works, with Gray's stream of consciousness. I love his perspective in this altogether... calling her name out like it was profanity! That's so Gray.

wow.
this is amazing! you can write! like super great! this isn't just a story! this is high literature! o.o
and it was so dreamy! :3
i totally loved it! please write more gruvia?! O:3