good

*snerk* I like it! and the parting shot..."she tells Artoo hello." Hee.

more Obi Wan adventures please. love them!

Obi-Wan always seems to find a way out of his scrapes...

Good story. Thanks for posting it.

The story title really rings true. Just on whim I came to look over your profile and was surprised to see some new stories.

Nice little one here.

Oh my gosh, imagine my surprise to see a new story up from one of my all-time favourite authors! It totally made my day! It is sooo great to have you back...I hope you have more stories coming! I ADORE the Bali series and all your stand alones (including this one)! Thank you times a million!

lolol this was good and funny :-) keep up the awesomeness!
-random reader w/o a profile:D

A while? I daresay it has! So good to see you back after all these years with some old school fanfic, showing people how it's done. It's been a long time since I ventured into this particular fandom, but I'll always come back for a Red Rose Knight fic. When the subject of good fanfic writers comes up, your name is one of the first that comes to mind, and that's the truth. There's some real craft going on here: a smooth, tight flow; spare but effective use of dialog tags and gestures; scene painting that's both rich and efficiently done. Very nice.

wut a kewl story. i think this it's gonna go cool places. more soon?