I loved this! Loved your portrayal of Mikey and of Mikey and Donnie's relationship in particular. Everything felt so right and in character. Awesome 2 shot.

This was good, intense and cute at the same time :D

This was totally from the 2K3 series. Heh. You actually have a good "voice" for the narration that stays pretty constant throughout the two-shot. I'd try to put in more imagery and sensory, to give a more clear visual of what's going on. It's hard to balance the voice of the character in the narration and the actual scene that's going on, but once you get that down, it comes out really cool. This was fun to read and I can't wait to see more of your work, dude!

Dude, that was actually really fun to read. Heh heh heh. It felt a lot like the 2003 show, which was pretty cool. I was never a big fan of their interpretation of Don, but this Mikey was so funny and badass that it was just awesome. Reminds me why I liked the 2003 Mike so much. Heh.

Nice story!

I like how you have written this fan fic in Mikey's POV. It's a great idea for a story and I want to congratulate you on a fantastic story. Is there going to be another chapter of this? I would love to see this taken further. Thank you! :)

This was a nice little two shot! I enjoyed reading it! I think you got the characters down really well actually, especially if you were going for the 2003 version!

the ending doesn't make much sense since Mikey has no head injuries, but the rest was portrayed very realistically

hahahahahah cute! I love it!

I've never seen the 2k3 version so I imagined it in 2k12. So it does work. I liked it.

Aww already over :( but it was awesome ;D
You did a very good job and the story's great! I'll put it in my fav list

LMAO, too funny, love it!

Awesome!

Pretty good fight scenes!

Ooh, really enjoying it so far!