Reviews for Snow Storm
Guest chapter 6 . 2/17
My name is cloudstrife2017 I really like this story of yours and I do hope that u continue this and make it a very long chapter also the rating of it should be M for certain parts and if u are leading it to a lemon I can see parts where u could have done that but I absolutely love the story if u make a long chapter of this fan fiction and u complete it then please send me an email on my fan fiction or my gmail
Draconeis chapter 3 . 2/19/2019
Huh
Draconeis chapter 2 . 2/19/2019
... Damn that was heavy just ouch
Draconeis chapter 1 . 2/19/2019
He is most definitely caught up in a snowstorm... And lol call me Kazuto
Archer Avalon chapter 2 . 1/22/2019
Clever. Depressing, but clever. One thing, your grammar seems to be suffering, but at least it's not enough to put me off. Good storyline, all things considered! Well done!
arata7kasuga chapter 5 . 1/22/2019
I am kind of disappointed in Shino to be honest...she claims to love Kazuto but she is physically abusive towards him for no good reason. Then she encourages the same thing that got him kicked in the ribs to begin with...is she going to keep being abusive and sending mixed signals?
Guest chapter 6 . 12/25/2018
I loved this so much, it made my day a little brighter, thank you for making this. Merry Christmas
Guest chapter 6 . 7/9/2018
I loved every chapter of your fanfic, it seemed really realistic for SaO with tying in real events and feelings that’s Kiritimati had with Asuna. Keep doing that. It’s like I’m reading a season 3 manga! Anyway, I’d like to see you expand on their relationship and have kazuto ask Sinon to be his girlfriend, and also maybe have a love scene afterwards that’s a bit more sexual since Sinon is more ready now? Idk.
mizuki12 chapter 1 . 3/2/2018
i liked your fanfic, it was what i wanted, when i watched SAO, i didn't like asuna , i prefered shino because for me she was the only one who was good for kirito , thank you , you granted my wish in this fanfic
GenjiXSinonDream chapter 3 . 2/23/2018
This isn’t much of a review but a question, is English your first language? It’s just how some of the words are spelled, or is it just typing errors
Hayden5826 chapter 6 . 1/8/2018
What that's it! Dang!
EndofDawn chapter 6 . 1/2/2018
Pls make more chapters and pls make it as good as the finished products! 100 out of 10
muddydwarf chapter 6 . 12/8/2017
keep up the good work
Otaku-Ne123 chapter 1 . 10/9/2017
Alright, can I just say that this story alone kept me up reading from 10:00 pm to 6:00 am? THAT IS HOW GOOD THIS STORY WAS! I seriously wish that you could make a sequel or SOMETHING! I LOVE your writing It's incredible, fantastic and also AMAZING! Totally an RR ( Re-read ) Keep on writing! At least you know that someone out there acknowledges your work
BlackTakka chapter 6 . 10/2/2017
You haven't written this for a long time, I'm sure many of us are eager to find out the outcomes
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