Awesome story. I LOVE IT! Though I feel like there should be a seque; for when Davis DOES call back... hehehe

Very good, keep it up!

Please write a sequel or something like when their on dates.

i got kinda confused on whos doing what and PLZ continue this it is AWE-SOME

Ok that was one of the best T. K. stories ever

Great fic! :D

Nice story!

You should definitely make a sequel...

I read this and I thought 3 things.
1. Oh Damn!
2. 2nd chapter is in order or a sequel.
3. I LOVE IT!

U better be writing some more chapters cause i want to now what hapens to them

Sorry it took so long to read, again, but daaamn that was hot XD And a great story! :D Thanks!

Great Fic. I would like to see more of these please!

Seemingly you have a preference for escalating development lol. I laughed a bit when Davis asked if they could kiss again and TK refrained himself from asking more questions. I thought it would end in more kissing and making out, but then it escalated into them pleasuring each other. Quite rapid development, I'd say, but okay and acceptable for a one-shot. I personally would have preferred ending it in a note of Davis' confusion over his own sexuality and feelings given his apparent crush on Kari in this story, as that would be fun to read. Still, this is a good story. Keep up the good work!

That was very sweet. Hot, but also very sweet.