Awe I love them together

The story was good but here are the problem areas-
1- The waist length hair thing (Byakuya does not have hair that long)
2- Byakuya's OOCness
3- Last part was really mushy tbh
4- The 8 years later part...10 kids?! I'm sorry but that's just too much
No offence meant, I'm just being honest

It was great :D

Super cute! I just wish there was more detail with the babies...

This is so amazing...I've read it at least a million times. You should write more KenBya;)