I have recently become engrossed with fan fi c and I have to say, this is fantastic. I never comment, but wow. Great story.

Great version of a story that broke many hearts.

What an evil woman!

FUCCKKK!

This is a piece of crap, why on the bloody pillock! Would any sane man or women pair Bella with Edward!

And seriously, BELLA is a fucking harlot, why the fuck did you trick the audience, the pairings clearly said Bella and VICTORIA...

Bella could fuck herself for all I care but why on earth did you kill off VICTORIA?

Loved, Loved, LOVED IT! I was so afraid that Victoria's vengeance would take over Bella's stoned cold heart but I should have know true love always finds a way to win over hate! Bella is Edward's mate as he is her's and that is how it should always be. Well done!

Great POV. Enjoyed this version

What a great story. I really loved it. Wish it were longer. Thanks for writing it

I love Victoria... I pity her in her pain and think that you portray her well.

Whew, that was intense! In a good way. I really enjoyed this one-shot and I liked the alternate path of Victoria's motives and actions. A good mix of suspense, oh no's! and an HEA! :D

Loved this!

too easy, she's still in shock and I'd love to see a chapter with her mind returning and her emotionally cutting Edward with accusations and demands. She should get her pound of flesh.

I loved that! Thanks! I was worried for a minute that she would really turn against Edward, but thankfully Victoria showed her true colors and we had our HEA!

Loved this great take on another alternative to what could've happened in the woods.

I liked this very much! I'm so happy you gave it a HEA!

It's a great story