enjoy reading it!

I really like this so far. It's an interesting concept. Though I think Radiz's hair would be a fire hazard lol.

Aw, Trunks and Bra are so darn cute. And I guess these alternate versions of them are closer in age than their canon counterparts. I do wonder how the dynamic between them would be, given such a situation. Hm, so Kuriza got killed by Cui in prison. Ha! Suck it! That's all I can say.

Gosh, you've been through so much these last few years. I've never had to bear the brunt of all that, let alone harbor those kinds of responsibilities. By comparison, I've been a lot more sheltered. I love your final message. It's really beautiful and inspirational and I agree. We should never isolate ourselves or turn towards any harmful vice, just because life seems dismal at some point. And speaking of "History of Trunks", I'm going to check out that other fic of yours hehe! :D

This was a great journey and I thank you for recommending this awesome story to me! Peace out! :)

Wow, seems Kuriza's just as much of a douchebag as Frieza, only a lot more stupid. I knew he'd try and pull something funny, but it seems he didn't get anywhere with it. Ah, awesome that Bulma's pregnant! Guess little Trunks is going to make his way into the world... and hopefully now that the Freeze cycle's broken, he won't have to deal with any unnecessary drama xD! :D

It cracked up so hard when Vegeta fooled Bulma like that xD. I think he should've played her a bit longer though, just for kicks haha. Not nice, I know, but nothing's funnier than her wrath LMAO. Ah, I knew that SOB Frieza was alive! Glad that Bardock killed him! He totally deserved that! Well, this thing will most likely go to trial, i'm guessing. I hope they can somehow get out of it. I also loved Bardock's backstory with Frieza and everything. I guess it makes sense why he is the way he is, but the man's clearly demonstrated here that he's worth redemption. He, Raditz and Kakarot should return to being a family again and he should probably apologize to Katie for those past remarks xD. So, I guess the story's almost finished now! Just one more chapter and then the good old epilogue! It's been a wonderful journey! :D

Some Russian roulette, eh? I wonder if Frieza is dead or maybe he wore an armored vest or something (after all, Vegeta did aim for the heart and not the head, so yeah). I think it's quite plausible that he escaped, but I guess I'll find out soon! :D

Whoa that was really, really tense. I'm surprised that Frieza knew about the officers nearby and yet he still confessed to all those murders. That fight was really awesome though. Glad that Zarbon's dead. I hope Vegeta can somehow be exonerated. But now comes the much tougher battle, against Frieza.

Zarbon really is mentally deranged. This dude's just plain sick and messed up in the head. He needs a psych-evaluation, that's for sure. Better yet though, a bullet to the brain... or perhaps to the liver or kidneys (he definitely deserves the pain). It was awesome that Launch came in, for the rescue. I just hope Vegeta can make it out somehow, as well. So I wonder how it'll go down from here.

Rodney isn't really a bad guy, I think, just foolish. He has the best intentions at heart, but I think he needs to show more contrition. His actions would've prevented Vegeta from making a recovery. What the hell? He needs to realize how wrong and messed up that is, especially as someone so close to the man's father! Plus, he has this dumb habit of assuming the worst in Vegeta without even hearing the full story (e.g. thinking initially that he'd drunk himself near-death and buying into Yamcha's previous fables)... I think maybe inviting him to the wedding wouldn't be a bad idea. He's a good friend, but just needs to be kept at more of a distance (unlike the other lot, i.e. Kakarot, Raditz and now... even Yamcha xD). No doubt Nappa makes a far better guardian, that's for sure.

OH NOOOO! They have Bulma! What a place to end! My God! You just love torturing don't you? xD! And dayum, the timing just could NOT have been worse! I need more STAT!

Weight-training in and of itself is pretty much useless in a real fight like that, just as Raditz pointed out. It's more about technique, dexterity and reading your opponent's moves. Strength is only one of many factors, so yeah. A lot of big strong dudes compete in MMA for example and don't do so well against smaller guys that have a far more refined and polished skill-set (Bob Sapp, for example). So it's good that they're getting in some training with Bardock. Once they familiarize themselves with the basics, all should go well.

Haha Bachelor parties never really made sense to me, tbh, at least... not in strip clubs or other provocative places like that (it severs the whole purpose behind a wedding). But I guess a ball game is a much better idea! :D

God, I really hate Vegeta's other family. They're basically the ones who caused the death of his mother and her unborn sibling, by going to Frieza, those naive, hateful shits. That's just screwed up! Good work, you narrow-minded bastards. I like Zorn though. He's really cool. I like to imagine that he was in fact, related to Vegeta that way (even in the canon). It's a nice thought!

Hm, I do wonder how Zarbon could be that sloppy though, to leaving behind a fingerprint on the bottle and to commit the act in a place, where a camera was watching. But then again, I guess he was desperate and had little time to make his move, so there's that as well. I hope they get enough to incriminate that piece of shit, but since there're a good 8 chapters of the story left, I figure it won't go down that easy.

Apart from all that, Bulma singing to Vegeta was just so heart-warming and then when he woke up, dayum! So many feels right there! I'm well and truly looking forward to what's ahead! :D

Oh God, I feel like such an idiot for missing this chapter. ; Oh well, I'm here now, so that's alright and it managed to fill in some gaps! Wow, Frieza truly is menacing, but like Bulma said, is it really wise to issue threats with so many witnesses around (and possibly a video camera recording the whole thing)? Anyway, back to the big stuff for me! :D

Oh God, this chapter full on broke me! I feel terrible for the whole lot of them, but especially Bulma. Gosh, when she sees the engagement ring there, my legs just lost all sensation. Freaking sad and angsty as hell! Frieza and his whole organization needs to be brought down, starting with that evil, twisted mofo Zarbon. Anyway, amazing and prpfound as heck this chapter. It really stood out for me!

And wow, those ambulance staff seem pretty single-minded and idiotic. Bardock's a lot more intuitive it appears! I'm starting to like the guy a lot more so than before and I have a feeling that he'll eventually come around! Till then! :D

Zarbon you sick, disgusting son-of-a-bitch! Damn, I hate this guy so much! Evil, just pure evil! There's a whole world of difference between love and obsession. This guy's screwed in the head. Boy, I guess you were certainly not kidding about the dark elements in this story. And dayum, what a place to end! I sure hope Vegeta can make it out of this mess somehow! There has to be a way, some way! And I hope he can somehow become stronger too, strong enough to overpower both Zarbon and Frieza (the gravity simulator ought to do the trick)... I guess this is what I would describe as a prime example of a "bad spot". Your readers must've been so mad being left in a zone like this xD. Lucky for me though, the fic's completed. Anyway, now my attention's well and truly fixated here! I must read more!

Oh God, so Frieza had people spying on Doctor Briefs. I kind of suspected as much. They must be the employees responsible for the fire and for blaming Dr. Brief after his death. It would explain a lot. The whole thing was orchestrated by that bastard Frieza, it seems. Well, as much as I dislike Bardock in this story, I do hope that him and the cop squad can make some sort of difference and incriminate Frieza somehow. It's getting more and more interesting now!