I literally re-read this chapter (and sometimes the whole story) every month when I'm on my period, just because I want my own Dean!

Two chapters in, approximately zero relationship development between the characters and Hermione is already sharing her entire life story with strangers. Oversharing much? *sigh* I really liked your summary and you write reasonably well in terms of grammar and so on but I'll be honest, the characterization so far is not impressing me. And neither is the interaction between characters. There's a lot of showing and not telling, they seem quite OOC and it's seems clear to me that you are so concerned with introducing Hermione past, particularly the non-canon bits that you are kind of forgetting to keep the character interactions as natural as possible. Either way everything seems rushed...
I'll be honest given that it's been a few years, this story would benefit from a rewrite. Pretty sure you can do better if you jusr go slower and allowed the characters to develop.

Holy Hell! (quoting Hermione from what, this or last chapter?) I always think that I'm suited better for angsty romance, but this fluff humor romance is making me happy. SQUEAL! BY THE WAY, nice stories. Love it. And is your name Emma? Emily? Emmaline? Emmett? Emerson?

Please, please, PLEASE tell me The Doctor actually make an appearance! I wasn't sure about it when they talked about the blue box, but Hermione's one sided conversation with him made me want him there.

This is awesome! Please update! You're officially my favorite author - I've read a lot of your stories
~Genevieve

PLEASE UPDATE! This is amazing...! :D

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I LITTERALLY FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY PLEASE FINISH IT!
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FAVORITE CROSSOVER SUPERNATURAL/HP FANFIC 3

I love it!

I am uncontrollably laughing right now! Luna is with the Doctor! He wants Hermione's autograph! I'm dying!

okay I like this story but it is jumping and it's annoying the crap out of me... Is this a whole bunch of one shots or is it an actual story? If it is a bunch of one shots then please let the readers know.. If it is a story then please find a way to make it flow much better it started of great but then felt jumpy by each chapter

I have recently rediscovered this story and it is really great! I hope you decide to finish this soon.

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This is good, is there more? This is my first crossover read and it's making me want to read more of them so thanks for that, my teachers may not love you for introducing me to more fanfic but I sure do.

OMG THIS WAS GREAT! MORE MORE PLEASE! I really love your writing so much and I read about two chapters every morning before school starts...great way to start the morning off, so I NEED MORE :D

AHHH YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS IS V PERFECT AAHHHHHH