I really love this chapter and well writen as well. Keep it up! Also, for some odd reason, I like when Karol is 13 years old or older. It makes him feel mature.

None of this is "shit", you hear me? NONE OF IT. I was laughing and squealing and drowning on feels, and it was wonderful.

(Granted I didn't read the Judy/Rita one, BUT)

At any rate, you deserve at least 3 times the reviews you have, because this is magnificent collection.

I don't think it was a total failure. I loved the way you wrote from Duke's POV. It looks like him, I think. And I never think that they could use a blastia with spirits...Good idea!

Even with all the attempts, he will do his job. Flynn is Flynn, we can't change him, of course, but that's why we love him!

Oh my, I can't stop to laugh while imagining everyone dancing XD (Espcially Yuri. I don't know, it seems really fun to see him dancing.)

And this one was cute too! Like everything else.
People love to talk with their pets, right? It's like if they had a friend with them, every day. And perhaps that's why Yuri & Repede are near of each other? Well, I love to imagine it.

I didn't thought that it was OOC. I think that you wrote Raven perfectly, and I'm always amazed by his relations with Leblanc and the two others one (I never remembered their names...T_T), and, of course, with the party's members.
What I want to say to your Raven is : "No matter what, Raven is Raven."

It's the first time that I read that I hear of Judita and...Well, thanks to you, I think it's cute! I didn't like Ristelle, but I think I'll like Judita now :D

Main Lession: Never get Yuri wet without paying the consequences.

Amazing. Perhaps for some people, it was boring, but not for me. I really love Estelle and I think that you perfectly depicted her in this writing. Thanks!
Oh, I'll read the next one when I'll be back from university. But so far, I love what you have written :3

Yes, everyone was proud of him, it was his moment and it was a great one...It's not because it was short that it wasn't good. I liked this one!

I don't even know how Rita managed to not kill the two of them. But Estelle had a good idea, at the end. I hope for them that it was good and Judith and Yuri won't spar again...XD

Repede...XD At least, thanks to him, Rita could buy new goggles, but it's true that I'll react the same as her, I think, so I can understand her T_T

Ooooh, it's really cute! I would like to read Estelle's book too, haha!
Anyway, I love how you write, and I'll read the next one!

I think you did well. Awesome job so far, can't wait to see more!