Well, Im sorry for not being PERFECT! Just because I spelt it wrong doesn't mean it's not good! I am proud of myself because this was my first story I have written. I know I am not a perfect speller but I still think this is pretty good! Yes thank you, I definitely need to know how to spell McGonagall correctly as knowing this one spelling will help me succeed in life. I am in debted to you for this! Goodbye!

Look, if you are going to write a fan fiction abut Harry Potter then you at least need to make sure that you spell words correctly! For example, you keep typing Magonagle but it is actually spelt McGonagall. If you cannot even spell names like that correctly then maybe you shouldn't write Harry Potter fan fiction after all!

OMG that is AMAZING! I can't believe you wrote that! Please update soon, I cant wait to find out what happens and what the feather does! Its seriously bugging me! Well done x