| Reviews for Shut That Bishop |
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Lizzie chapter 1 . 3/13/2015 WELL WELL WELL, WHAT'S THIS I SEE? A DRAMIONE FIC? BY SAFARI? PLUGGING ANOTHER DRAMIONE FIC BY SAFARI? INTERESTING. (I didn't even read this yet but I'll give you a real review when I do) |
MelodyPond77 chapter 1 . 9/7/2014 THIS MADE UP FOR ALL THE ANGST. IT WAS SO FREAKING AWESOME. SO MUCH BETTER THAN HOMEWORK. I AM LAUGHING MY ASS OFF RIGHT NOW THAT WAS SO GREAT ahhhh i seriously love you. You're awesome. 10/10. Congrats again. :) |
purplepam chapter 1 . 6/8/2014 I totally giggled. Blaise's texts sound like a girl's. I actually hate it when characters are OOC,but in this story,I didn't mind. Hermione's thoughts are hilarious! Great job. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2014 sweet |
Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 3/3/2014 Hahaha cute |
ohmoony chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 Alright, firstly, I'd just like to establish that I LOVE YOU TOO, BBY! :D Now, onto the story... I liked that your version of Hermione was so, so different. It made the story unique, and I quite liked that. I also liked that Draco was marrying Astoria, and Hermione was upset, and sneaked into the wedding. Haha, and Blaise, trying to give away her presence. :P I actually really don't like Draco/Hermione, but you wrote the story so well that I didn't mind reading it. I mean, I actually loved the story, so well done, dear. :P :D The memory of drunk Draco asking Hermione to marry her, and how he texted her the night before the wedding... yeah, that was really adorable, and probably my favorite part of the story (I'm a sucker for romance... yet, for some reason, I write angsty fics like there's no tomorrow... :P) I loved, loved, loved that she got to Speak Now. That was beautiful. And Draco's reaction was perfect. Honestly, the whole ending was perfect, Safari darling. So cute and fluffy- I absolutely loved it. :D OH AND I FORGOT TO TELL YOU, I GIGGLE-SNORTED WHILE READING THIS STORY. THE SARCASM WAS AWESOME. ;P :D |
AnUnholyAmountOfPasta chapter 1 . 1/14/2014 I really like your writing style; it's very engaging and witty. I also liked the way you managed not to make the story really cheesy, which is probably quite hard with a plot involving interrupting a wedding due to years of semi-unrequited love. One of my favourite parts was the paragraph where Draco drunkenly proposed to her but she pretended not to hear it - I don't know why, but to me this seemed very in character for Hermione. Your spelling and grammar are also very good. The Pope, though? That's so over the top, even for the Malfoys! Not nearly as weird as Narcissa baking cookies for Hermione though... I was a little confused to start with because I thought it was a muggle AU - why would Hermione and Draco have gone to the same primary school and why are they all using mobile phones? Also I thought it was a little weird that they drove away at the end rather than apparating, but I suppose it's more dramatic and it's only a small nitpick. Overall I really enjoyed this and would definitely recommend it to any Dramione shippers :) |
Liv-Love-Work-Play-READ chapter 1 . 1/1/2014 Oh my my my, that was a cute fic. It's great, especially for all us swifties that know the song xxx poor Astoria though, the girl in the dress cried all the way home |
MadHattress3 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 Omg! I started to worry she wasn't ever gonna say anything! Btw I love how Blaise acted…awesome story :D |
FanFairyB chapter 1 . 9/4/2013 LOL this was fun. |
Geena04 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 I really liked this :) keep writing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 This is one o my favorite songs so all the lines you quoted I heard them being sung. I wrote another songfic with speak now and posted it. Yours is definitely better. It was awesome how you incorporated the song into it. Loved it. |
tjw1989 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013 Wow awesome story you should add a second chapter great read thankyou ;) x |