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Loved it

Wow...I really enjoyed this!

This is a great story. I like the concept of comparing them to animals, and I especially like your comparisons. You did an amazing job with this, don't doubt yourself and/or your writing.

I love the comparisons in this for two reasons: 1. They are extremely apt, to the extent that you can just SEE it all happening. It's impressive when writing can embody a character not just in their dialogue but all the way down to their idiosyncrasies of gesture and posture and expression. 2. The personality traits you explore in all the ladies aren't the ones that are most commonly invoked, but they are accurate and interesting and endearing in their very real complexity. I think you did a great job :)

Well, don't self yourself short! I liked this! Elle's my favorite during the time she was on Criminal Minds, and then it became Emily. I've always liked JJ, just as much as the rest of the cast. So yeah, it was a good story!

Good story, I'd really like to see where you take this if it's something you plan on continuing. Like if JJ really does leave Will, how she does it, interaction between Emily and Henry, maybe some back story/ go more in depth on JJ and Emilys relationship. Would be very interesting.

I thought it was a good story. You have a really unique sort of writing style.

I typically don't leave a lot of reviews but after reading your story, you most definitely deserve one.

Don't sell yourself short. This was by far one of the best short stories I've read here in a very long time. It was beautifully written and I'm sure there are other readers here, like myself, that thoroughly enjoyed it.

Hope to see more from you and keep up the good work !

This has got to be one of my favourite short pieces, for any character, pairing, or fandom, ever.

I must admit, I'm a sucker for animal comparisons, especially when golden retrievers are involved!

This just made me smile, and I so (selfishly) hope you write more for Criminal Minds in the future.

Loved it! I have to admit I never really thought of the ladies in that way but your comparisons were bang on in my opinion.

I really like your writing! Please write more CM fanfics!