HAHAHAHAHA! Nagisa is so perfect! And you got everyone's character right! Most of the time that's pretty hard to do, but you wrote them perfect. The whole story was perfect. From the steamy smut, to the bits of humor, to the characters, to your writing, PERFECTO! Dun Dun Dun Duuunn! Your story has now been favorited. :)

This is exactly what my imagination has been craving XD
Dom Mako is just.. Ugh I have no words!
I think you found the perfect balance between his rough, sexy side and his cute, caring side. Not many fics I've read present him like this, totally a hidden gem from many a year ago.
You might not check this account anymore, but thank you for writing anyway 3

This was very good indeed and I loved the omake! Nice writing, too. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Hahahahahaha! I can totally see that final scene happening far too often for Makoto's comfort. Lol

Jesus Christ Makoto

This is soo good! I love the omake xD
It would have been hilarious though if the whole team really had walked in on them having sex

Loved it! 3 was exactly what i was looking for :)).

IM LIVIN FOR THIS YES LMAOO THE ENDING THOOO

LOLOLOL the ending!

Well that was funny and hot. I'm not sure if I can see Makoto as a Dom tough...

It's amazing!

Live your life how you want to, there will be others where and how ever you decide. This is just my opinion, but I'd say most reviews are, you write excellent smut. Be proud.

I liked it but I got a little confused in the middle but MAKOOOOHARU and I never imagined makoto on top hmmmm

Appart from the supergood writing (my english teacher would be surprised) the smut is fantastic, Way much better than fifty shades of grey, i loved it...and it turned me on...way too much

10/10 read it to frands, they really enjoyed