Like this take on the after RJ relationship between Patrick and Teresa.

Thanks for the read cliff hangers again but I hope there will be more to this one

I love this story! Wish you would complete it!

This is a great story line. Hope one day you continue it.

This is AMAZING! The plot is so unique but flawless and intriguing and suspenseful...i love how you captured Lisbon and Jane's relationship after Red John. Just... loved it. I would give anything for an update to this fic, even though its been a while. I honestly think this is worth pursuing, PLEASE.

This was the sweetest, saddest chapter I've read out of all the fanfics so far. My heart hurts. Loved the conversation about Grace and angels.

please update!

The Mafia is dangerous! They will threaten Lisbon and little Grace? Jane will not settle for anything less than watch his family during 24 hours!
I never forget the stories you write, and always hope that one day you update all! Bye!

Nerwen, I just saw this! I read You're in my Veins, which was great (btw), and I was jonesing for more of your stories and I came across this one. This amazing!
It's like an alternative reality to Best Mistake, which is my favourite fic ever. I really hope you update and finish this story. Can really help with long hiatus. I hope you finish this and You're in my Veins. You are such a fantastic writer and I really hope you finish these incredible stories!

Your story is my current favourite. I come on fanfic everyday to check if you have updated. Please post the next one soon!

Please update!

I just wanted to say I'm sorry for whatever your going through personally & I hope things get better for you soon. I think you are an amazing writer & honestly I only come to fan fiction to see if you've written any new stories or updated. I used to read some other stories but you are the only author I look for now because I don't have as much time as I used to. My favorite story is Hope & I always get super excited when there's an update, although I love to see anything new you've written as well! Good luck with everything you're struggling with and thank you for sharing your talent with us! :)

Great going. The case is getting really interesting. Loved the conversation between Jane and Jane is back! Are we going to see more of this Jane? I hope he gets what he wants soon. Poor Jane, Lisbon should give him a chance. Would really like to know how Van Pelt died.

I am glad to see that you stood up for yourself. Its time people should understand that its not your obligation. I don't mind waiting if the chapters are long and interesting :)

Reading your author's note; I'm sorry if people have been harsh to you, and I'm sorry that you're personal life is not going well at the moment. You have exceptional skills as a writer; you are one of a few who I could read any story and honestly enjoy it. You write excpetionally well, both the story line and the way that you write. I know this isn't much but I hope you do realise how truly great you are as a writer and I hope you manage to get through whatever is going wrong. This chapter is (as usual) captivating and interesting, with the right amount of action and personal feelings. I'm sure you have plently of people to talk to, and I know I am a stranger, but like I'm sure many of your readers would be, I am happy to 'listen' if you ever want to talk or rant or anything.
Keep writing your brilliant stories.

Very good.I really want to read the next chapter.