| Reviews for Evening Liaisons |
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sxkurajima chapter 4 . 8/30/2017 I just have a bad feeling since the first chapter. I'm not the type who likes threesomes, I thought this fic will be only Ereri/Riren. Levi doesn't seem to be someone who would share what's his. This is actually a great fic and I love how write the smut scene! But sorry I don't really like the ending. You should've warned the readers about the threesome in the beginning though. |
mistyamethyst1312 chapter 4 . 5/18/2017 OH come on you have to write more to this. Its to good to be complete! please please more it was awesome! |
AlmaVieja chapter 4 . 2/22/2017 Damn, this was very good, I wish there was a second part where we saw the three of them happily together *heart* I loved that in the end Levi liked it enough to make the proposal of them doing it again (and again) :3 your descriptions are really nice. And I really like this couple/threesome, I think there should exist more material of it in the world haha. |
anime-nympho chapter 4 . 1/9/2017 Damn, I would have to say that you nailed my headcannon for Levi's and Eren's personalities in a relationship. Everything down to the Levi's fake resistance to Eren's naughty streak was perfect. Nonetheless for me, I don't think Levi would be too willing share Eren all the time, if ever. But I still enjoyed the threesome, as well as your writing. Though, you may want to get someone who has a strong background in English to check your grammar. You do have good grammar skills which will make it hard to anyone to check and catch errors. There were a few in the story. Other than that, well done. Very well done. |
Mixx-Fandom chapter 2 . 6/30/2016 My poor cinnamon roll shocked for life |
Anon chapter 4 . 12/18/2015 Wow...I really commend your writing skills! Just...amazing! |
StarburstPhoenix chapter 4 . 12/2/2015 I seriously need the next chapter now :3 |
KD Skywalker chapter 4 . 8/11/2015 I loved this story! You should make a sequel! |
EsVendetta chapter 2 . 12/5/2014 Okay... about your "which name is right" question, I had to whip out my dictionary for this. The japanese kanji used in the manga (調査兵団 rom. Chousa Heidan) have multiple meanings like 3/4 of 7the kanji the Japanese use. 調- exorcise, investigate, key (music), meter, prepare, tone, tune, writing style. 査- investigate. 兵- army, private, soldier, strategy, tactics, troops, warfare. 団- association, group. Also add on this for size: Survey/Investigate- Chousa (same kanji) Reconnaissance- Teisatsu Scout- Teisatsu Corps- Heidan (lit. army corps) (same kanji) Legion- Shinbutai Regiment- Rentai Sooooooo "Survey Army Corps", is the literal translation. All of the names have the general idea down and are close enough, but that's what I found... so unless someone wants to call my dictionary a liar, there ya go. If I were you, I would go with Survey Corps, but any of the others are fine, just not the literal translation. |
HPeppers chapter 4 . 7/15/2014 I think I'm going to need new ovaries. |
MasquedAngel chapter 4 . 7/9/2014 You, my friend, are absolutely fantastic. You have no idea how many times I had to look away blushing and in a fit of giggles. Normally, I have self control to rival Levi... but you really got me going. You should definitely continue this! I find this trio very enticing. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2014 You are truely, the one and only, yaoi goddess. |
Speechless chapter 4 . 6/27/2014 I have no words on how hot this is and what it does to me. (*.*) |
shinigami-seeker chapter 4 . 5/23/2014 I loved this fic up until the last lemon, Levi and Eren, yes! Levi, Eren and Armin, no! |
mandarinnnnnnn chapter 1 . 5/11/2014 The correct term would be scouting regiment :) |