Nice although I wish I could read the elf meeting in more depth.

I soon as I read the word burial mound I remembered about The Grandmaster Of Demonic Cultivation.

Damn Harry was brutal｡ﾟ(TヮT)ﾟ｡

I laugh SO loud! XD poor Haldir...

update again pls... I love the story

It begins pretty well, then we meet a prejudiced young child who decide, just after seeing one elf's memory that they are all self-centred narcissus. Then instead of posing to ask questions he ran away from the people who could have gave him information.
It could be good but please rewrite the story.

I got a headache reading this... thanks

This story is too great, I can't wait for you to continue this. I love the way you write, such great imagery. Honestly this is probably the third time I've read through this. I just keep coming back haha

This story was too boring and it make me skip too many paragraph when i read all chapter in this story. I hate if you only use one point of view. It all about Harry. Can you make another point of view other than him? For example Prince Legolas?Maybe his father, King Thanquil?Is that his real name? Lord Elrond?Or another character. Then, this story will be interesting to read.

Really enjoyed reading through this, any chance of it getting updated?

I love it. Can't wait for you to continue until the ending. Really looking forward to it.

...the only prick here seems to be Harry. He seems like a jerk.

The story is dragging a bit, it's gotten kind of boring.

This was such a good story to

Most disappointing ending ever. It held such potential but ut had to be ruined. Oh well nothing can be done about it now can we ay?