The ramen girl is Ayame btw

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

I like your story, but can you create a new paragraph in each dialog. It'll easier to read to reader. Thank you and I hope you'll update soon

Wow! This is really good! I like how you have the story. Keep up the good work!

Well things are coming together now.

Training looks good.

Your writing is coming together. Though it could use some work but its still good.

Wish you luck.

glad naruto picked fuinjutsu and ninjutsu (hope he will have his parents and clan prodigy talent)
and poor hinata, hyuga clan are bastards.
kinda hope their loved caged bird seal was originally some uzumaki fuinjutsu (like used by uzu on their shinobi prisoners and criminal), and have naruto use his clan right to attack hyuga clan for personal clan jutsu thief and illegal use and forbid them using it anymore (maybe even ask some indemnity for the crime)

good chapter.
so naruto know his parents.
but why hokage can't give naruto his parents house, or even their money? It is naruto birthright, konoha or elders have no right on them.
Hope you plan naruto obtain them soon.

can't say the last line is best way to made cliffhanger

can't wait to see what happens in the rest of the story. hope to read more soon!

¡Dios! Separa los dialogos, es caotico y dificil de leer. El ritmo es horrendo, respira y trata avanzar por escenas

What's the point of pairing Naruto with his God damn fangirl stalker. We all know the reason kishimoto did it was because of the size of tits and NO other reason then that I mean she has absolutely no personality other then being Naruto's fangirl and stalker.

Wow please update your story soon what an emotional cliff hanger.
Well Done & Great Work
Gen

Please update soon!

Ahhh finally you are back. Glad to read that. Please update soon.

Drrakkos

I like it! Lots of typos, but your message comes across.