If you continued this story on another forum please tell me! I really want to read more.

Please tell me you're not abandoning this fanfic! This chapters got me on the edge of my seat! Please update soon

Why is Tom saying that his mom won't be able to find him? He still has a version of hi self back on Earth, doesn't he? There have been times during this story where I've been a bit confused about the reasoning for when Tom is in Chaotic or on Earth, like why he waits until after school to port himself there.

This is a masterfully crafted story, I am definitely going to check back on it and look at the other fics by you.

Sadly there is no tumblr link on your profile page like you thought. I've heard it's a problem. Could you try again? I'd really like to check it out.

Aw man I love this story!

This is one of my favourite Chaotic fanfics. The story's well-paced and exciting. I love the world-building; the effort into this is amazing~ I look forward to the next chapter~

Oh my gosh, i just found this a few days ago and its amazing! I was so excited for Tom and Maxxor to meet while Tom is in his Gherix form, only to findo out it hasn't been written yet :c

Anyway, a fic hasn't been able to catch my attention like this in a long time. Its well written, the pacing feels very natural, it flows beautifully and its very compelling. it also adds a lot of layers to the characters i've never thought about before. Good job!

I patiently await the next chapter, it feels like it's gonna be a doozy c:

why is it when things go right in a sense, they go wrong right after :/ awesome new chapter, well worth the wait :) and until more, later and have fun writing :)

OMA, OMA, OMA, OMA! This is getting /so/ good!

OmA, I can't wait for the next chapter! Especially since there's the possibility that Maxxor and the other two could finally meet up with Tom and there might or might not be some misunderstandings going to happen!

Everyone is so in character and everythings just happening like /BAM/ and the plot is looking even /better/!

Oooh~, keep up the good work!

What happens next and when is the next chapter?

Yay! An update! So, crellan is going out to look for tom now. What's he going to think about Tom when he finds him? Ooohh! Is the myterious attacker the one who Nythea shielded from scrying? I bet it is. And now Maxxor and others are rushing towards the situation! This is great! Oh! Also, the spirits could be what is coding the players. Hmmm

I must know what happens and who the hell was able to do that to her

Here's to hoping that Maxxor's group makes it in time. Did Tera (still call him Tom in my head) leave his scanner by the lake?

Hey, Chaos! Glad to see you're up and running again! The new update Im glad went back to Chaotic, at least for a brief moment. The ending was really susenseful, I hope I see more soon.