OMG THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL GIFT! *faints* I hope your life has been wonderful and that it only gets better!

Pleeaaaaaaasseewww updaaaaate I love this so frigging much

I know it says discontinued but please reconsider starting it up again this is so good, and I love the scaracrow x dorothey shiping and sinse hunk and and scarecrow are practicly the same person... just please update again I realy love this story

This is a damn fine story, and you are very talented!

this is so wonderful good job

I know you have not updated in a while but I wanted you to know that I love how this story going so far. this seems like a forgotten fandom. please continue this

Hi I'm new to the story and don't even know if you will get this since it's been a couple years since updated but I had to way in. My thoughts are they both try to impress her (with simple things) but in the end they are the same person and become one person. Just a thought maby get your creative juices going good luck

NO!
No make Scarecrow bad guy!
He too sweet to be bad!
Scarecrow is my favorite character and I cant ever see him as being bad.

Love your story by the way.
really enjoying it.

Oh I really do hope that you'll find some time to continue this incredible adventure between Hunk and Dorothy. I simply adore the chemistry between them! Please don't make Scarecrow a 'Hans' type of character, I think he has enough love in his heart to let Dorothy decide for herself on who she wants in her life. Please update soon you're fantastic at this, really!

I really hope that you don't have Scarecrow go all-out Hans but I really don't know how this whole thing could end up...

Ooh scarecrow should be the hans! I love him too but that would be cool in my opinoin, like he shouldn't want to kill Dorothy or anything but he should like mess with hunk some, you know make him angry

Update soon please! I can't wait for Hunk to meet Scarecrow! Anyway I love this story, it's really good especially considering its your first fanfic and you're only learning English, I am amazed. Keep up the good work.

P.S. again, update soon! :)

I can't wait until Hank meets the Scarecrow. Although I'm not sure whether they'll get along with each other or not. I hope you update this soon.

all 5 chapters suck

For the love of Christ finish your stories! They are far to goo not to!