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Probably your overall most engrossing chapter. Mostly very well done action and the traveller's played for all they are worth.

Such a shame the fic is abandoned, really...

is that another agent of SD setting her up for more?

hey, this is great! with proper amount of Taylor suffering. bit confused why demon isn't piping-up

This was a LOT of fun to read. The Exalted system makes for a lot of good synergy here, and I like that you were able to keep some of the flavor. Also, playing the what if game the whole time until you released the original stats was a worthwhile side game.

So far, I haven't seen a lot of the ‘inevitable corruption’ part of being a Fiend, but expected that was coming, now that there are some regular people Taylor was associating around. The idea of her eventual betrayal of the Number Man and Cauldron is gleeful.

Thanks for sharing!

Worm is bleak enough by default. An AU where Taylor has no meaningful connections with other people just hurts to read.

I like it, although Skitter worried about bedbugs feels... unnatural...

Rereading this fic.

Still good, which makes me doubly sorry it's abandoned...

wait, who the fuck is this Ashley bitch?

Ouch... Or maybe, knowing worm verse, good?

Liked it a lot.

Now if you described looks, mannerisms and such in more detail, it would be still better.

What a show.

Your traveller's are quite a bit more... coldly deadly than wild bows, which is saying something.
Still, even with some unpolished es, a great chapter (or collection thereof).

I love the way you describe these "freak capes", fantasy and punching back sound really really weird, and cook, pfwahahaa

So, getting into the deep end, and aiming to max out city clogging side effects?
I approve.

Of coming close to the ebon dragons first manifestation/shinma, not so much.

Could t help yourself do what?

Being fittingly dark to Taylor? At least she got rid of Shadowbitch, one of the things I always like in fanfictions of Worm.