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   LadyRhoswen chapter 5 . 1/5/2014 Really a good story, p, ease update it! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/3/2014 please update I love this story! |
| yuiop chapter 5 . 9/29/2013 Nice] |
| Skyeward MusicLover chapter 5 . 9/29/2013 great chapter. keep on updating. want to know what happens next |
| This chapter 5 . 9/16/2013 Great chapter continue please! |
| Meresger chapter 5 . 9/16/2013 Really nice. But I'm a bit confused by Neal's comment about "mid-September". Do you mean it IS mid-September or that's when the school year starts? Because the curse broke around March 2012, since Emma's birthday in the pilot is October 2011 and the curse breaks not long after Valentine's the following year. Also, Victorian London on the show is not the same Victorian London as in "this" world (not sure if you just had Neal giving the short version); it's an AU like Whale's universe (according to Adam and Eddy), so Neal has been to at least 3 worlds since leaving FTL. And, less important, I'm pretty sure the garage is Marine Garage and Tillman just works there with the towing service like Billy (RIP, Billy!) |
| 0FJDTHSEGafd chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 I am LOVING this! I can't wait to see how Henry and Neal's relationship develops and to see how Regina reacts to Henry's father being in the picture now. Keep up the great work :-) |
| fire1 chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 Hello Amostpeculiarmlle, Good chapter and i most say am loving this story more and more with every chapter. I was hoping Neal would find out Emma is Henry mom and that he most be the his father. one or both find out soon. because i could so see Neal even going to his dad for help to get Emma home to there Son. am so looking forward to what you have for use next |
| sudoku chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 I realized in the last chapter that the sheriff and the kid must be Charming and Henry but it was too late as I already submitted a review :) I'm not sure whether you will follow canon for the rest of the events except for Neal, Emma and Regina of course. I hope Neal find out Henry is his son soon and how long before Rumpel realized Neal is Bae. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/13/2013 please update soon i can't wait until emma meets neal! and henry's reaction too! |
| SkyBlueSw chapter 4 . 9/9/2013 Nice, I'm enjoying this story. |
| Skyeward MusicLover chapter 4 . 9/8/2013 love the chapter. cant wait to read more. plse update |
| Meresger chapter 4 . 9/8/2013 Brilliant! (I think Storybrooke is near Bangor. The largest city near to it anyway. In the original pilot script, Emma - Anna - attempts to put Henry on a bus to Bangor, so presumably, that's where he caught the Greyhound to Boston from after somehow hitching a ride from somewhere along that mythical Route 6. It *is* a little over 4 hours from Boston to Bangor.) |
| fire1 chapter 4 . 9/7/2013 Hello amostpeculiarmlle, good chapter and much longer. I am a big Neal/Emma fan but there not a lot of good fic for them, so am always happy to see more of Neal in any fic. Am also hoping you put Neal and Emma together by the end of the fic. I love that Neal could get over the line but Greg could not, that should show everyone he is part of world some how, if he could get into town and someone else could not. am very much looking forward to Neal finding out about Henry and Henry finding out Neal is is dad. oh and Emma and Neal coming face to face and Neal coming face to face with dad... so much to look forward to. I hope you update soon. |
| oncerswan chapter 4 . 9/7/2013 Great chapter, cant wait to see what happens next |
