i rarely saw onepiece's AU story.
i like your idea and how you write this story. i read some of the comments and wow i really cant wait to read this story until the last chapter.
i hope you wont pair those brothers (law ace sabo luffy) with each other. i can't picture them in love romantically with each other because i always picture them as a family. but hey, it's your story. you can do whatever you want. i will still keep read this story even if you pair those brothers. maybe i will skip the romantic part...

anyway, thankyou for the story! i will enjoy it

This was awesome and I can't wait to read more!

honestly the best part, the best story, however I will never go through this feels trip again. It felt so real and painful but so beautiful and lovely. It's complicated!

Amazing!~~~~

I really enjoyed this story, certainly much more that I expected to. I must admit I was quite hooked on it. I loved the character development between the 4 kids and seeing how they changed and their different attitudes to things. It was nice seeing that despite Law and Ace fighting almost constantly that they did care for one another.

I really look forward to reading Law's story as there are so many unanswered questions and hints throughout this story and I love how you have developed his character.

Awesome story. Had me teary-eyed at a lot of parts.

NO SMOKER-YA!

Hah! The end and beginning were hilarious!

AAAWWW DID SABO JUST CALL SMOKER DADDY?!

This is really pretty scary, but also adorable!

AAAWWWWW

OOOHHHH...shit

I love this story! It's fantastic, thank you so much for writing it! I've spent several days totally entranced by your writing, everything about this story is fantastic!

Holy crap what a story! You have a serious knack for writing some very dark and disturbing but incredible stories, it's like a roller-coaster ride. The characters were pretty amazing, not to mention the buildup of the plot and the creeping tension that connected chapter to chapter. Although Luffy didn't really get a major role in this story (but he's still adorable!), this has got to be one of the best darker stories out there! Be proud of yourself!

You are a deeply disturbed person you know that? Ive written some pretty gruesome death scenes, but ive never written gruesome death scenes for children. Reading this made me cringe and shudder and hurt. It was awful and wonderful at the same time because thats a sign of good writing.